FAYEDAA...sheba

by Sheba on February 13, 2010, 06:05:40 PM
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                     qandeel main quwat nahin jo'andhon'ko roshni de..,
                     kitaab  main quwat nahin jo jahil ko aqal de..,

                     'rukh' se zulf kyon hataaon kisi ke liye..,
                     yeh patthar to nahin raah ka jo takleef de..,

                     chaman unse kyon cheenu ek phool ke liye..,
                     ye roti to nahin gharibon ka jo pet bhar de..,
            
                     apne husn ko kyon numaaya karoon sab ke liye..,
                     ye koi 'ilm' to nahin zamaney ka jo bhala kar de..,

                     apne alfaaz kyon sajaon ek ghazal ke liye..,
                     ye koi taqreer to nahin jo samaaj ko paigham de..,
          
                     kyon loon sahara kisi ka apni shohrat ke liye..,
                     yeh koi chiraag to nahin jo hamesha roshni de..,

                     khud ko mita kar dekh sheba auron ke liye..,
                     ye wo jazba hai jo hamesha ek khusboo de..,


                    
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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2010, 06:10:47 PM »
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nice sharing sheeba ji...
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jamshed.khan
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2010, 09:46:32 PM »
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hiiiiiiii sheba i m jamshed.khan iread your poetry this is a really very good poetry i congrets you this is nice becase this like a tradisional meaningfull urdu poetry.
iwant you read my pyaar wo hai mera poetry and give me your comment.
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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2010, 09:35:41 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!!

Aakhri do Sher To Bahut Hi khoobsurat The.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2010, 01:18:58 PM »
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Nice
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2010, 11:59:19 AM »
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nice sharing sheeba ji...

thank u broken
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2010, 11:59:51 AM »
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hiiiiiiii sheba i m jamshed.khan iread your poetry this is a really very good poetry i congrets you this is nice becase this like a tradisional meaningfull urdu poetry.
iwant you read my pyaar wo hai mera poetry and give me your comment.
kuda-hafiz

thank you jamshed ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2010, 12:00:36 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!!

Aakhri do Sher To Bahut Hi khoobsurat The.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thank you khawaish ji
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sbechain
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2010, 12:01:04 PM »
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Nice

thanks rishi ji
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Talat
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«Reply #9 on: February 17, 2010, 04:08:49 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Sheba Ji
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sbechain
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«Reply #10 on: February 18, 2010, 09:20:51 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Sheba Ji

thank you celmira ji
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«Reply #11 on: February 18, 2010, 09:44:27 AM »
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 :icon_salut:Bahut bahut khoob Sheba ji,very touching gazal.mindblowing creation. Hats off to you!
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«Reply #12 on: February 18, 2010, 10:47:23 PM »
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:icon_salut:Bahut bahut khoob Sheba ji,very touching gazal.mindblowing creation. Hats off to you!

thank u madhu ji
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«Reply #13 on: February 24, 2010, 12:58:52 PM »
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Sheba Ji Bahut Hi Khoobsurati Se Aapne
Bahut Hi Gehri Baaten Kahin Hain...
Har Line Kamaal Ki Jhorhi Hai Aapne.
Par Mere Dil Ko Jisne Chua...Woh Yeh Lines Hai
Mujhe Inki Soch Bahut Hi Achhi Aur Sachhi Lagi.
Bahut Hi Umda Likha Hai Aapne....Bahut Khub.. Applause Applause Applause

Dil Se Nikli Da'd Kabul Karen..!



Khush Rahiye....

~Shihab~


thank u shihab sb
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«Reply #14 on: February 24, 2010, 02:05:56 PM »
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Kamaal ka likha hai Sheba ji. Ek nai tarah ki poem likhi hai aapne. Umdah and excellent.
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