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« on: September 02, 2007, 11:06:35 PM »
Ek koshish... apni dil ki bath kehne ka.. Hope k meri ye koshish kamyab hoga.

Zindagi main Kabhi koyee is tarah dil ko kuchal jate k aisa lagta k kya unhe pata hota ke
hamara dil pe kya guzra unke aisi herkatonse??.!!

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Hum kabhi kisii ki bhool ke bhi
Cheena muskan nahi karte
Hum sakht-tabiyat hai lekin
Bin bath tufan nahi karte..!!

Hum andkaar main reh sakte
Uski tokkar bhi seh sakte
Per kiranraaj ke dhar per jaa
Hum manga daan nahi karte..!!

Jo pyar se koyee vish bhi de
Hum haste-haste pee jate
Per daya-daan main mila hua
Hum amrit paan nahi karte..!!

Auron ki bath nahi kehte
Hum apni baat batate hai
Apna apmaan nahi sehte
Apmaan auron ka bhi nahi karte..!!

"Roja" ka dil jahan mil jaye
Pehchan usee se kar lete
Jis.se dil nahi mile apna
Usse pehchan nahi karte..!!

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« Reply #1 on: September 09, 2007, 11:32:48 AM »
hi
gud work
lekin apne jo intro diya hai us se poem match nahi hui..
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Mujhe muskurana aaya hi nahi tha...
Toh fir woh kaun si khushi cheenne aaye thae ??

Jo Hum khaamosh hue unhe laga thehraav aa gaya..
Unhe kya pata jo zalzala tha wo sada ki liye hume kuchal gaya


GOD BLESS YOU


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Mere hisse ka ghaam ka
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« Reply #2 on: September 09, 2007, 04:14:59 PM »
bahoot khoob Roja, last do pehra bahoot hi ache lage!!
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« Reply #3 on: September 11, 2007, 06:58:05 AM »
Beautifully written roja....
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« Reply #4 on: October 05, 2007, 05:04:29 AM »
Bahut hi auchi ghazal hai. Sorry main pehle reply nahi kar paya. bcoz maine ye ghazal dekhi nahi thi. Meri ghazal ki tareef karne k liye Thanks.
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« Reply #5 on: October 07, 2007, 02:05:25 AM »
Bahut bahut shukhriya....

Sahiba...*Accha match nahi ki Intro aur mera poem?*
{Ek aur bar pad lena... apne bare main kehne gayee thi.
Shayad teek se aapko samja na saki..)

Thanks Pooja di...  , Sohna, and  Rahul_soul ji....

Rahul ji...:D aapne hamara likha pasand kiya bahut bahut
shukhriya.... keep coming;
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« Reply #6 on: October 07, 2007, 05:40:15 AM »
Reply Karne K liye Thanks. Main kuch likhne laga hun umeed karta hun ki aapko aucha lagega.



        Kisi aur ki bahon mein reh kar
                                        humse wafa ki baat karte hain,
      Yeh kaisi chahat hai yaaro
                                        woh bewafa hain ye jaankar bhi hum unhi se pyar karte hain.
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« Reply #7 on: October 10, 2007, 09:38:59 AM »
Acha likha hai Roja aapne aur rahul aapne bhi
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ERI ROOH NA TARSE MERI TARAH TERI WAFA KE LIYE,
JAB AAYE KAZA MERI TO DO AANSOO BAHA DENA.
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« Reply #8 on: October 29, 2007, 10:46:37 PM »
Quote from: "rahul soul"
Reply Karne K liye Thanks. Main kuch likhne laga hun umeed karta hun ki aapko aucha lagega.



        Kisi aur ki bahon mein reh kar
                                        humse wafa ki baat karte hain,
      Yeh kaisi chahat hai yaaro
                                        woh bewafa hain ye jaankar bhi hum unhi se pyar karte hain.


Thanks and nice reply Rahul ji... Sorry for late reply
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« Reply #9 on: October 29, 2007, 10:47:14 PM »
shukhriya Rajrishi ji.
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« Reply #10 on: October 29, 2007, 10:49:50 PM »
Hisaab Hai Mere Pass...

Apni tanhayi ka jawab hai pass mere
Tum nahi gam nahi.. Yaad teri hai pass mere

Koyi kitni bhi chaal chale hai manjur mujhe
Herkaton ko samajne ki kitaab hai pass mere

Mera hi zulm gin-gin ke na bata zamane ko
Tere bhi gunahon ka hisaab hai pass mere

Na jaan payega koyi meri fitrath ko
Chup-chup ke waar karne ka nakaab hai pass mere

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« Reply #11 on: October 31, 2007, 01:28:00 PM »
Bahoot Badiya Gazal hai,.
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« Reply #12 on: October 31, 2007, 03:23:35 PM »
wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob Likha Roja!!! Good Creation!!!!
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« Reply #13 on: November 01, 2007, 02:49:22 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB ROJA..BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE...
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Tujhe Eh Zindagi,
Hum Door Se Pehchchaan Lete Hai....
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« Reply #14 on: November 01, 2007, 05:03:00 PM »
Roja

Beautiful =D> =D> =D>
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