*Gazal*

by Roja on September 03, 2007, 03:06:35 AM
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«Reply #135 on: April 23, 2009, 01:56:34 PM »
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Quote from: tanhasahil on April 23, 2009, 01:54:37 PM
Buhat pyari ghazal aane pesh-e-qidmat ki hai
qabil-e-tareef..

Shukriya Tanhasahil ji.
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«Reply #136 on: April 23, 2009, 02:22:36 PM »
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WAH ROJA BAHOOT KHOOB!!
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«Reply #137 on: April 24, 2009, 05:49:02 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 23, 2009, 01:44:58 PM
Thanks Uncle ji... and lovely lines  Usual Smile


You're welcome Roja, and thanks!
            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #138 on: April 24, 2009, 01:34:53 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 23, 2009, 02:22:36 PM
WAH ROJA BAHOOT KHOOB!!

Thanks dear... (Be Active na. Miss u )
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«Reply #139 on: April 24, 2009, 01:39:02 PM »
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Upper se teek tak hai beetar tadak gaya
Apne hi kadh ke bhoj se yeh ghar tadak gaya

Pattar se toot.ta raha darpan sada yahan,
Is bar kuch gazab hua pattar tadak gaya

Besharam ho gayi hai bahare bhi aaj ki,
Dharthi fati hai sharam se amber tadak gaya

Vishwas jo bacha raha dushman ke raj mein
Voh doston ke gaov mein aksar tadak gaya

Chehra jo unke pass tha jis per guman tha,
Chehra hawa mein kal vohi gir kar tadak gaya

Khooni sadi ka aadmi pattar ka aadmi,
Is aadmi ko dekhkar kanjar tadak gaya
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«Reply #140 on: April 26, 2009, 04:51:56 PM »
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Koyi khushbu idhar nikal aaye
Mera ghar uska dher nikal aaye

Rah pe aake maine socha toh
Jane kitne safar nikal aaye

Sari sadiyon ka ek-sa kadh kyu
Ik sadhi mukth-ser nikal aaye

Koyi ginti na ho saki poori
Itne jyada sifar nikal aaye

Ab vo baatein hawa ki karta hai
Ab toh uske bhi per nikal aaye

Kurdare haat ye magar unmein
Kaise-kaise huner nikal aaye..
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«Reply #141 on: April 29, 2009, 02:07:38 PM »
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जब तेज-तेज हो के गुज़रने लगी हवा,
क्या बात है न जाने अखरने लगी हवा !

कांटे चुने जो पाँव से मैंने बहार के,
फूलों से झोलियाँ मेरी भरने लगी हवा !

जितने भी आरती के दिये थे बुझा गयी
किस तरह मंदिरों से गुज़रने लगी हवा !

वो बरहमिमे और भी अच्छे लगे हमें,
जुल्फ्रों से छेड़छाड़ जो करने लगी हवा !

हमने जो इन्तेज़ार में सपने सजाये थे
उनमे हसींन रंग भी भेरने लगी हवा !

लायी है कुछ पियाम बहारों का गुल के नाम
नामाबरी का काम भी करने लगी हवा !

जब सहमे माहताब थी, "रोजा"  गुल हुयी
दिल की मुंडेर पैर दिये धरने लगी हवा !
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«Reply #142 on: April 30, 2009, 07:09:42 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 26, 2009, 04:51:56 PM

Koyi khushbu idhar nikal aaye
Mera ghar uska dher nikal aaye

Rah pe aake maine socha toh
Jane kitne safar nikal aaye

Sari sadiyon ka ek-sa kadh kyu
Ik sadhi mukth-ser nikal aaye

Koyi ginti na ho saki poori
Itne jyada sifar nikal aaye

Ab vo baatein hawa ki karta hain
Ab toh us ke bhi par nikal aaye

Khurdare haath ye magar un mein
Kaise-kaise huner nikal aaye..


Roja! You possess a heart of a real poetess! This is also a lovely creation! Kaash, 'Mere ghar, teyraa dar nikal aaye!'
                                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #143 on: April 30, 2009, 07:27:46 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 29, 2009, 02:07:38 PM

जब तेज-तेज हो के गुज़रने लगी हवा,
क्या बात है न जाने अखरने लगी हवा !

कांटे चुने जो पाँव से मैंने बहार के,
फूलों से झोलियाँ मेरी भरने लगी हवा !

जितने भी आरती के दिये थे बुझा गयी
किस तरह मंदिरों से गुज़रने लगी हवा !

वो बरहमिमे और भी अच्छे लगे हमें,
जुल्फ्रों से छेड़छाड़ जो करने लगी हवा !

हमने जो इन्तेज़ार में सपने सजाये थे
उनमे हसींन रंग भी भेरने लगी हवा !

लायी है कुछ पियाम बहारों का गुल के नाम
नामाबरी का काम भी करने लगी हवा !

जब सहमे माहताब थी, "रोजा"  गुल हुयी
दिल की मुंडेर पैर दिये धरने लगी हवा !


Roja Rey! Kyaa baat kah di hai tooney! Waah!
लायी है कुछ पियाम बहारों का गुल के नाम
नामाबरी का काम भी करने लगी हवा !
Khoobsoorat hain teyrey dil-dimaag! Kyaa boloon?
Bachaa kahaan hai koyi raaz, jisey mein kholoon!!
                             - abd bundeli

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«Reply #144 on: May 01, 2009, 01:50:04 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on April 29, 2009, 02:29:32 PM
waah waah Roja ji bohot acha likhti hain aap.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bohot achi ghazal likhi hai..

Bahut bahut shukriya @kaash ji.
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«Reply #145 on: May 01, 2009, 01:51:24 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on April 30, 2009, 07:09:42 AM
Roja! You possess a heart of a real poetess! This is also a lovely creation! Kaash, 'Mere ghar, teyraa dar nikal aaye!'
                                    - abd bundeli

What I posses I dont know uncle ji. But I am honoured  notworthy
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«Reply #146 on: May 01, 2009, 01:52:58 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on April 30, 2009, 07:27:46 AM
Roja Rey! Kyaa baat kah di hai tooney! Waah!
लायी है कुछ पियाम बहारों का गुल के नाम
नामाबरी का काम भी करने लगी हवा !
Khoobsoorat hain teyrey dil-dimaag! Kyaa boloon?
Bachaa kahaan hai koyi raaz, jisey mein kholoon!!
                             - abd bundeli

Dhanyawad Uncleji aapne hame pada aur appreciate kiya. I am totally touched and honoured. Thank you onceagain.
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«Reply #147 on: May 02, 2009, 09:03:24 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 01, 2009, 01:51:24 PM
What I posses I dont know uncle ji. But I am honoured  notworthy
Quote from: Roja on May 01, 2009, 01:52:58 PM
Dhanyawad Uncleji aapne hame pada aur appreciate kiya. I am totally touched and honoured. Thank you onceagain.

Roja! You're always welcome! Thanks for all your sweet words!
            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #148 on: May 04, 2009, 02:29:19 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 24, 2009, 01:39:02 PM
Upper se teek tak hai beetar tadak gaya
Apne hi kadh ke bhoj se yeh ghar tadak gaya

Pattar se toot.ta raha darpan sada yahan,
Is bar kuch gazab hua pattar tadak gaya

Besharam ho gayi hai bahare bhi aaj ki,
Dharthi fati hai sharam se amber tadak gaya

Vishwas jo bacha raha dushman ke raj mein
Voh doston ke gaov mein aksar tadak gaya

Chehra jo unke pass tha jis per guman tha,
Chehra hawa mein kal vohi gir kar tadak gaya

Khooni sadi ka aadmi pattar ka aadmi,
Is aadmi ko dekhkar kanjar tadak gaya



Kamaal ka likha hai aapne Roja Ji
very very good
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #149 on: May 04, 2009, 02:50:14 PM »
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Shukriya Servesh Rastogi ji Usual Smile
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