*Gazal*

by Roja on September 03, 2007, 03:06:35 AM
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«Reply #105 on: March 26, 2009, 06:07:38 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 26, 2009, 02:18:01 AM
Bahut bahut shukriya aapka.. aapne padkar tarif ki yahi mere liye fakr ki baat hai. Yu hi saat dete rehna Uncle ji  Usual Smile

You're most welcome Roja!
            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #106 on: March 26, 2009, 06:13:39 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 18, 2009, 12:00:49 PM
Raah andha dikha raha hai mujhe
Swaad ghoonga bata raha hai mujhe

Khud ko lagne laga hu mai tabla
Ek anadi baja raha hai mujhe

Kal samajta tha aaina mujhko
Aaj pattar bata raha hai mujhe

Vo angooti ka vaida karke
Ab angoota dikha raha hai mujhe

Mai na Gandhi hu, Mai na Gautam hu
Dard kyu aajma raha hai mujhe.

Bahoot khoob Roja dear Thumbs UP
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«Reply #107 on: March 28, 2009, 02:57:12 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on March 26, 2009, 06:13:39 AM
Bahoot khoob Roja dear Thumbs UP

Thank you very much dear Salma  Usual Smile
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«Reply #108 on: April 06, 2009, 02:25:15 AM »
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Meri gazal mashaal hai tu ut.ke thaam le
Yeh phool hai tu chahe toh pattar ka kaam le

Roti ki ladayi mein teri saat rahegi,
Mazjid mein tu jhuke ya kahi Ram-Ram le

Jeena isse hai saat tere saat maregi,
Amrithkalash utaye ya tu vish ka jaam le

Vimar ho, bhooka ho, tadapta ho raat ber,
Paani ke saat meri gazal subah shaam le

Kho jaye jab dishayein andhere ke raj mein,
Sooraj ko tu pukar ya ki mera naam le..
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«Reply #109 on: April 06, 2009, 03:25:36 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 06, 2009, 02:25:15 AM
Meri gazal mashaal hai tu uthh ke thaam le
Yeh phool hai, tu chahe to patthar ka kaam le

Roti ki ladayi to teri saath rahegi,
Masjid mein tu jhuke, ya faqat Ram-nam le

Jeena hai isse saath, tere saath maregi,
Amrit-kalash uthhaye tu, ya vish ka jaam le

Bimar ho, bhookha ho, tadapta ho raat-din,
Paani ke saath meri gazal subah shaam le

Kho jayen jab dishayein andhere ke raj mein,
Sooraj ko tu pukar, ya ki, mera naam le..

Lovely Roja! It's lovely! Keep on writing! It's really great Roja; you being a non-Hindi/Urdu speaking person. Your love for these lovely languages is commendable!               
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«Reply #110 on: April 06, 2009, 04:28:12 AM »
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Very nice Roja dear Thumbs UP
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«Reply #111 on: April 06, 2009, 02:10:10 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on April 06, 2009, 03:25:36 AM
Lovely Roja! It's lovely! Keep on writing! It's really great Roja; you being a non-Hindi/Urdu speaking person. Your love for these lovely languages is commendable!               
                    - abd bundeli


Yeh sab aap jaison ka aashirwad hai uncle ji. Meri likhayi pe kahi grammatical error hua toh mujhe PM jariye keh dete hai aur mai correct karleti hu.... still trying to b perfect like you ji.  Usual Smile
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«Reply #112 on: April 06, 2009, 02:25:37 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 06, 2009, 02:10:10 PM
Yeh sab aap jaison ka aashirwad hai uncle ji. Meri likhayi pe kahi grammatical error hua toh mujhe PM jariye keh dete hai aur mai correct karleti hu.... still trying to b perfect like you ji.  Usual Smile
No body is perfect in this imperfect world Roja! You're a fine admirable person! Your writings make people happy: and that's great!
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«Reply #113 on: April 06, 2009, 02:43:44 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on April 06, 2009, 02:25:37 PM
No body is perfect in this imperfect world Roja! You're a fine admirable person! Your writings make people happy: and that's great!
                         - abd bundeli

ooh itna tarif kardiya hai aapne k mera dil ber aagaya uncle ji. Thank you very much onceagain.
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«Reply #114 on: April 06, 2009, 02:44:34 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on April 06, 2009, 04:28:12 AM
Very nice Roja dear Thumbs UP

Thanks dear Salma
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«Reply #115 on: April 06, 2009, 02:49:30 PM »
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ooh itna tarif kardiya hai aapne k mera dil ber aagaya uncle ji. Thank you very much onceagain.


Roja! You're welcome!
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«Reply #116 on: April 06, 2009, 02:49:57 PM »
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Bad rahi hai raat zara ghaur kijiye
Qaid hai prabaat zara ghaur kijiye

Sham se hi shehar ka mausam kharab hai,
Ho na vardaat zara ghaur kijiye

Kabil yakeen nahi cheez ab rahi,
Aadmi ki zaat zara ghaur kijiye

Jal rahi hai raat aur chand tap raha
Kaanp rahe gaat zara ghaur kijiye

Jinke haat mein thamayi ghar ki baagdor
Kiski hai jamaat zara ghaur kijiye

Kis disha mein jaa raha julus aajkal,
Kaun hai anadi zara ghaur kijiye

Zindagi ki jang badi zor chal rahi
Ho na kahi maat zara ghaur kijiye



(sorry friends.. kuch lines mein spelling mistakes hua yeh gazal mein. Abhi correct ki hu. Thanks for noting dear Ahmed ji. and  thanks for giving correct spellings dear Talat  Usual Smile )
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«Reply #117 on: April 06, 2009, 09:11:09 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 06, 2009, 02:49:57 PM
Bad rahi hai raat zara gaur kijiye
Kaid hai prabaat zara gaur kijiye

Sham se hi shehar ka mausam karab hai,
Ho na vardaat zara gaur kijiye

Kabil yakeen nahi cheez ab rahi,
Aadmi ki jaat zara gaur kijiye

Jal rahi hai raat aur chand tap raha
Kaanp rahe gaat zara gaur kijiye

Jinke haat mein thamayi ghar ki baagdor
Kiski hai zamaat zara gaur kijiye

Kis disha mein jaa raha julus aajkal,
Kaun hai anadi zara gaur kijiye

Zindagi ki jang badi jor chal rahi
Ho na kahi maat zara gaur kijiye


bhut khoob roja......................very nice work
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«Reply #118 on: April 07, 2009, 03:01:27 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on April 06, 2009, 09:11:09 PM
bhut khoob roja......................very nice work

Bahut bahut shukriya Aslam ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #119 on: April 07, 2009, 11:17:54 AM »
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Beautiful creations, great work Roja Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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