ghazal by Rakesh "Nirmal" Mr S K saini ko samrpit jinse maine bahut kuch seekha hai...

by pranshshar on October 02, 2012, 01:36:45 PM
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आपसे तब हमें फायदा हो गया ,
आपके गम का जब आसरा हो गया।

हाथ मेरे खिलौने बनाते  रहे,
वह तो बातें बना कर खुदा हो गया।

जब मिले राह मे  गम मुझे आपके,
गम से मेरे मेरा फासला हो गया।

ढूँढने मे तुझे वक़्त ज़ाया हुआ,
इस बहाने मगर फैसला हो गया।

रो पड़ा याद करके पिताजी को तब,
जब  मेरा खून मुझसे खफा हो गया।

जब किसी घर मे लायी पिता ने कभी
दूसरी माँ  पिता तीसरा हो गया।

बशर :मनुष्य
Rakesh "nirmal"
www.nirmalghazal.blogspot.in
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«Reply #1 on: October 02, 2012, 01:49:44 PM »
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Bahut khoob
umda ghazal, umda khayaalaat.
Aapke nischal ehsaas ko salaam.
is kadi ko rukne na deejiyega.. aage baantte jaaiyega.

mera bhi pranaam saini saahab ko.
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«Reply #2 on: October 02, 2012, 02:16:36 PM »
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are bhaai mujhe itnaa sar mat chadhaao khai aapke is pyaar ko meraa salaam aur haan aapkee is behatreen ghazal par dheron daad
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«Reply #3 on: October 03, 2012, 12:42:56 AM »
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wah wah dhero dad
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«Reply #4 on: October 03, 2012, 03:57:36 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2012, 05:38:28 AM »
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आपसे तब हमें फायदा हो गया ,
आपके गम का जब आसरा हो गया।

हाथ मेरे खिलौने बनाते  रहे,
वह तो बातें बना कर खुदा हो गया।

जब मिले राह मे  गम मुझे आपके,
गम से मेरे मेरा फासला हो गया।

ढूँढने मे तुझे वक़्त ज़ाया हुआ,
इस बहाने मगर फैसला हो गया।

रो पड़ा याद करके पिताजी को तब,
जब  मेरा खून मुझसे खफा हो गया।

जब किसी घर मे लायी पिता ने कभी
दूसरी माँ  पिता तीसरा हो गया।

बशर :मनुष्य
Rakesh "nirmal"
www.nirmalghazal.blogspot.in

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