new ghazal by rakesh nirmal

by pranshshar on September 20, 2012, 10:23:30 PM
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बस इसलिए यहाँ रहनेकि अजी, चाहत नहीं हमको,
जिसओरहवा वहाँ बहनेकि अभी, आदत नहीं हमको।

मेरा पेट जब दिखता था सब, बुलातेथे घर अपने,
जब लगी असल मे भूखतो मिली, दावत नहीं हमको।

बस इसलिए कि हाथ न धो सका, पर-आंसू पोंछ कर,
पुजारी ने दि पूजा की अब, इजाज़त नहीं हमको।

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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2012, 12:08:37 AM »
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बस इसलिए यहाँ रहने कि अजी, चाहत नहीं हमको,
जिस ओर हवा वहाँ बहने कि अभी, आदत नहीं हमको।

मेरा पेट जब दिखता था सब, बुलाते थे घर अपने,
जब लगी असल मे भूख तो मिली, दावत नहीं हमको।

बस इसलिए कि हाथ न धो सका, पर-आंसू पोंछ कर,
पुजारी ने दि पूजा की अब, इजाज़त नहीं हमको।

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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2012, 09:14:17 AM »
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bahut khoob nirmal ji badhaai
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2012, 10:31:09 AM »
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बस इसलिए यहाँ रहनेकि अजी, चाहत नहीं हमको,
जिसओरहवा वहाँ बहनेकि अभी, आदत नहीं हमको।

मेरा पेट जब दिखता था सब, बुलातेथे घर अपने,
जब लगी असल मे भूखतो मिली, दावत नहीं हमको।

बस इसलिए कि हाथ न धो सका, पर-आंसू पोंछ कर,
पुजारी ने दि पूजा की अब, इजाज़त नहीं हमको।


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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2012, 11:04:22 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2012, 12:01:47 PM »
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bahut khoob
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