ghazal by rakesh nirmal

by pranshshar on October 04, 2012, 08:14:38 PM
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ज़ियादा हंस के आखीरस  तू हमको क्या बताएगा,
अगर दिल मे ख़ुशी है तो तेरा चेहरा बताएगा।

मुझे पूरा भरोसा दोस्त अपनी परवरिश पर है,
अगर मैं बंद कर लूं आँख दिल रस्ता बताएगा।

समंदर पार करना हो तो रख निस्बत  जहाजों से,
तेरा मल्लाह तो दरिया को भी गहरा बताएगा।

मुखालिफ हम अगर तेरे मुहब्बत भी अगर बांटे ,
यकीनन इस को भी तू मुल्क पर खतरा बताएगा।

मेरे घर के हैं दरवाज़े बहुत छोटे तेरे आगे,
तू अन्दर आएगा कितना तेरा झुकना बताएगा।

तेरे दिल की सियासत पर ज़माने भर का पहरा है,
मुझे अफ़सोस होगा जब तू दिल अपना बताएगा।

मुखालिफ :प्रतिद्वंदी
आखिरस :आखिरकार
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«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2012, 08:44:50 PM »
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bahut khoobsoorat ghazal hai dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2012, 08:46:13 PM »
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bahut badiya  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2012, 09:18:30 PM »
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bahut khoob....
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«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2012, 09:33:36 PM »
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Khubsurat peshkash hai Rakesh Ji ki,
waah waah

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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2012, 10:45:51 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai
wah wah wah
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«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2012, 11:17:28 PM »
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ज़ियादा हंस कर आखिर तू हमको क्या बताएगा,
अगर दिल मे ख़ुशी है तो तेरा चेहरा बताएगा।

मुझे पूरा भरोसा दोस्त अपनी परवरिश पर है,
अगर मैं बंद कर लूं आँख दिल रस्ता बताएगा।

समंदर पार करना हो तो रख दोस्ती जहाजों से,
तेरा मल्लाह तो दरिया को भी गहरा बताएगा।

मुखालिफ हम अगर तेरे मुहब्बत भी अगर बांटे ,
यकीनन इस को भी तू मुल्क पर खतरा बताएगा।

मेरे घर के हैं दरवाज़े बहुत छोटे तेरे आगे,
तू अन्दर आएगा कितना तेरा झुकना बताएगा।

तेरे दिल की सियासत पर ज़माने भर का पहरा है,
मुझे अफ़सोस होगा जब तू दिल अपना बताएगा।

मुखालिफ :प्रतिद्वंदी
bahut khub
chehara dekh wo manoj aadmi ki niyat jaan jaate hai
jaane mujhe pahachanne mei hi dhoka kyu khate hai
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«Reply #7 on: October 05, 2012, 12:15:18 AM »
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मेरे घर के हैं दरवाज़े बहुत छोटे तेरे आगे,
तू अन्दर आएगा कितना तेरा झुकना बताएगा।

Waah Bahut Khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 05, 2012, 06:40:24 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause lijiye seven star rachna bahut pasand aai.
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«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2012, 11:17:53 AM »
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