Ghazal

by Safi Yani on June 19, 2009, 08:45:08 AM
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Paigaam us nazar ka fakat kucch palon ka tha
Bas reh gaya woh kaam jo mere labon ka tha

Waaiz(updesh dene wala)ko naagawar thi aawargi meri
Ya phir gila huzoor ko apni hadon ka tha

Ilzam kya kisi pe mere dil ke bojh ka
Saara kusoor sirf meri hasraton ka tha

Khanjar se leke daar-o-rasan(phaansi ka takhta aur phnada)tak woh silsila
Gar gaur kijiye to fakat kaatilon ka tha
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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2009, 09:05:07 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai Janaab.. Bahut Bahut Khoooob Safi Saheb.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2009, 09:12:23 AM »
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BAHUT UMDA SAFI JI,HAMKO BHAA GAYI
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«Reply #3 on: June 19, 2009, 09:13:08 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Safi Ji..!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Keep going..

Shally.
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«Reply #4 on: June 19, 2009, 10:08:21 AM »
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Bahaut khoob..Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2009, 02:46:15 AM »
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Wah Bahut Acche  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2009, 05:17:06 AM »
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Quote from: Safi Yani on June 19, 2009, 08:45:08 AM
Paigaam us nazar ka fakat kucch palon ka tha
Bas reh gaya woh kaam jo mere labon ka tha

Waaiz(updesh dene wala)ko naagawar thi aawargi meri
Ya phir gila huzoor ko apni hadon ka tha

Ilzam kya kisi pe mere dil ke bojh ka
Saara kusoor sirf meri hasraton ka tha

Khanjar se leke daar-o-rasan(phaansi ka takhta aur phnada)tak woh silsila
Gar gaur kijiye to fakat kaatilon ka tha




BAHAUT KHOOB SAFI SB
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2009, 12:28:46 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Safi Sahab
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2009, 12:34:19 PM »
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Bahut ache safi ji....keep writing Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2009, 10:14:21 PM »
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beautiful gazal Safiyani ji,very nice creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2009, 10:15:10 PM »
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Quote from: Safi Yani on June 19, 2009, 08:45:08 AM
Paigaam us nazar ka fakat kucch palon ka tha
Bas reh gaya woh kaam jo mere labon ka tha

Waaiz(updesh dene wala)ko naagawar thi aawargi meri
Ya phir gila huzoor ko apni hadon ka tha

Ilzam kya kisi pe mere dil ke bojh ka
Saara kusoor sirf meri hasraton ka tha

Khanjar se leke daar-o-rasan(phaansi ka takhta aur phnada)tak woh silsila
Gar gaur kijiye to fakat kaatilon ka tha



BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI SAFI JEE...
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«Reply #11 on: June 20, 2009, 10:18:01 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Safi Ji
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«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2009, 04:49:10 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on June 20, 2009, 10:18:01 PM
Bahut Khoob Safi Ji
Bahut shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: June 22, 2009, 04:50:32 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on June 20, 2009, 10:15:10 PM
BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI SAFI JEE...
Thanks for the comment.
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«Reply #14 on: June 22, 2009, 04:51:56 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on June 20, 2009, 10:18:01 PM
Bahut Khoob Safi Ji
Thanks Rajesh
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