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by khalidrawat on June 06, 2010, 02:17:38 PM
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Aye parind-e-fikr, tera aastana jal gaya
Thak ke jis ja bethta tha wo thikana jal gaya

qaid ker lete the jis ke bal pe tujh ko sher mai.N
Sooch ke panchi mere wo tazyaana jal gaya

jaal lafzoo.N ka bichate the jaha.N tere liye
Tair-e-fikr-e-rasa wo aashiyana jal gaya

sard mohri kha gai duniya ki shakh-e-jism ko
bulbul-e-idraak tera aab-o-dana jal gaya

Khalid Jamil Rawat
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2010, 08:36:05 PM »
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KHALID SAHEB BAHUT ACHCHE!BAS ZARA IDRAAK KA MATLAB PATA NAHI WARNA GAZAL KA POORA LUTF UTHATE.
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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2010, 11:45:20 PM »
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Aye parind-e-fikr, tera aastana jal gaya
Thak ke jis ja bethta tha wo thikana jal gaya

qaid ker lete the jis ke bal pe tujh ko sher mai.N
Sooch ke panchi mere wo tazyaana jal gaya

jaal lafzoo.N ka bichate the jaha.N tere liye
Tair-e-fikr-e-rasa wo aashiyana jal gaya

sard mohri kha gai duniya ki shakh-e-jism ko
bulbul-e-idraak tera aab-o-dana jal gaya

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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2010, 01:29:44 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2010, 01:36:13 PM »
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Hello! khalidrawat ji!
Wah wah wah, bahut umda kalaam se nawaza hai janaab aapne. Nudrat-e-alfaaz se muzaiyan ye ghazal qaabil-e-qadr hai. Daad qubul kijiye.

Aye parind-e-fikr, tera aastana jal gaya
Thak ke jis ja bethta tha wo thikana jal gaya

qaid ker lete the jis ke bal pe tujh ko sher mai.N
Sooch ke panchi mere wo tazyaana jal gaya

jaal lafzoo.N ka bichate the jaha.N tere liye
Tair-e-fikr-e-rasa wo aashiyana jal gaya

sard mohri kha gai duniya ki shakh-e-jism ko
bulbul-e-idraak tera aab-o-dana jal gaya

Khalid Jamil Rawat
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