"Ghazal tujhko kehne"

by aaina on September 12, 2009, 12:03:05 AM
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Hum mohabbat mai jeene ka asar kyu.n daikhe.n
Tujhko bata ey qatil e nazar kyu.n daikhe.n

Hum to chalte hain, ke chalna hamra kaam
Hum musafir hain meel ka pattar kyu.n daikhe.n

Jo doobna hai to teri aankho mai doobenge
Hasrat bahri nazro.n se samandar kyu.n daikhe.n

Ye jaante hain ke tara aakhri khat tha wo
 Nigahen daikhen raasta tera, magr kyu.n daike.n

Jo ja rhe hain tujh se door to jaane dey
Qadam bad na payenge, palatkar kyu.n daike.n

Ghazal tujhko kehene ke tareeqe hain bhut
Radeef qafiya ya phir behr kyu.n daikhe.n
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«Reply #1 on: September 12, 2009, 12:10:17 AM »
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Wah Wah Bahut Khooooooob Aslam Bhai.. Behad Lajawab Gazal Likhi hai Aapne.. Khaas kar Lafzon Ka Jis Khubsoorati se Sajaaya hai aapne.. Usse Is Gazal Ki Khubsoorati me Chaar-chaad lag gaye Hain..! Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob Bhai.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2009, 12:18:31 AM »
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Bahoth Qoob , Aslam Sahab , Bahoth UMda 3rd ashar hame behad pasand aya , yunhilikhte rahen app , Khuda apko khush rakhe !!


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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2009, 01:42:52 AM »
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Wah Wah Aap to hamesha se hi behtreen likhte hai janab..waqai rooh ko aaram dete hai aapke lafz..bahut bhadiya.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shally.

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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2009, 01:45:11 AM »
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aa--ha-aha wah wah kya baat ahi aaina ji,bahut koob. kya farmaya aapne ki"ghazal kahne ke---------radiff kafiya aur behr kyon denkhen"
Main aapko ye kahna chata hoon ki yo india mein maine jitni ghazla abhi tak padi hai, un sab main ye ghazal sabse behtar,azeem ,taza,original aur pure metre  ke sath hai, aur badiya aur behtar misre aapse padne ko milenge,insha allaha,
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2009, 02:02:13 PM »
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Hum mohabbat mai jeene ka asar kyu.n daikhe.n
Tujhko bata ey qatil e nazar kyu.n daikhe.n

Hum to chalte hain, ke chalna hamra kaam
Hum musafir hain meel ka pattar kyu.n daikhe.n

Jo doobna hai to teri aankho mai doobenge
Hasrat bahri nazro.n se samandar kyu.n daikhe.n

Ye jaante hain ke tara aakhri khat tha wo
 Nigahen daikhen raasta tera, magr kyu.n daike.n

Jo ja rhe hain tujh se door to jaane dey
Qadam bad na payenge, palatkar kyu.n daike.n

Ghazal tujhko kehene ke tareeqe hain bhut
Radeef qafiya ya phir behr kyu.n daikhe.n

Wah wah wah AB its amezing really bohat hi achi hai mujhe har sher pasand aaya bohat very very nice... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: September 12, 2009, 04:58:25 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB AAINA JI
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«Reply #7 on: September 12, 2009, 09:11:36 PM »
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Wah Wah Bahut Khooooooob Aslam Bhai.. Behad Lajawab Gazal Likhi hai Aapne.. Khaas kar Lafzon Ka Jis Khubsoorati se Sajaaya hai aapne.. Usse Is Gazal Ki Khubsoorati me Chaar-chaad lag gaye Hain..! Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob Bhai.. Applause Applause


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thnxxxxxxxx dear mann is hosla afzaaai ka bhut bhut shukriya zarra nawaazi hai dear tumhaari ke aise kalaam ko bhi intna nawaate ho thnxxxxxxxx again
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«Reply #8 on: September 12, 2009, 09:12:57 PM »
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Bahoth Qoob , Aslam Sahab , Bahoth UMda 3rd ashar hame behad pasand aya , yunhilikhte rahen app , Khuda apko khush rakhe !!


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qadeer bhai bhut shukriya aapka youn hi sath daite rahiye
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«Reply #9 on: September 12, 2009, 09:15:09 PM »
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Wah Wah Aap to hamesha se hi behtreen likhte hai janab..waqai rooh ko aaram dete hai aapke lafz..bahut bhadiya.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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zahe naseeb ke aapka ither se guzar hua bhut bhut shukriya ke apne bande ki ghazal ko saraha, is hosla afzaai ka bhut bhut bhut shukrya
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«Reply #10 on: September 12, 2009, 09:21:28 PM »
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aa--ha-aha wah wah kya baat ahi aaina ji,bahut koob. kya farmaya aapne ki"ghazal kahne ke---------radiff kafiya aur behr kyon denkhen"
Main aapko ye kahna chata hoon ki yo india mein maine jitni ghazla abhi tak padi hai, un sab main ye ghazal sabse behtar,azeem ,taza,original aur pure metre  ke sath hai, aur badiya aur behtar misre aapse padne ko milenge,insha allaha,


saaz sahab kyun meri qaza bulwaana chahte hain aap, mashallah se yahan sab hi bhut ahcay likhne waale hain aur bhut acha likhte hain ye mehez ittefaaq hoga ki aapko meri ghazal kuch ziyda hi achi lag gayi wagrna mashallah yo pe aapni apni zameen ke sab hi mahir hain, apka kin alfaazo.n mai shukrya ada karun aapne jin mohabbat bhare alfaazo.n se nawaaza hai uska behad mamnoo hu.n inshallah koshish rahegi ke aage bhi aisa hi kuch likho.n, ek baar phir tahe dil se aapka shukurguzaar hun ki aapne hosla afzaai ki.
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«Reply #11 on: September 12, 2009, 09:22:09 PM »
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Wah wah wah AB its amezing really bohat hi achi hai mujhe har sher pasand aaya bohat very very nice... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley


thnxxxxxxxxx so much K4P..................
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«Reply #12 on: September 12, 2009, 09:22:59 PM »
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Wah wah Aslam ji,lovely gazal,bahut khoob mindblowing creation excellent. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: September 12, 2009, 09:24:53 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB AAINA JI


aap jo bhi hain aapka naam laine mai aisa lagrha hai ki aapka shukrya ada nhi kya ja rha balke kuch aur kaha ja rha hai isliyn naam laine se parhaiz karte huway aapka shukriya ada karna chahta hu.n is hosla afzaai ka, thnxxx alot
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«Reply #14 on: September 12, 2009, 09:25:49 PM »
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Wah wah Aslam ji,lovely gazal,bahut khoob mindblowing creation excellent. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thnxxxxxxx so madhu ji for ur appriciation
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