Hai andheyraa, shama'a hee jalaa jaaiye!

by abdbundeli on September 04, 2012, 09:18:57 AM
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Door sey hi, kharhey yuun na muskaaiye!
Maajaraa-e-jigar hai: idhar aaiye!!

Din guzartaa hai yuun, raat aatee hai yuun:
Husn sey apney, yeh ghar sajaa jaaiye!!

Kyoun jalaatee hain shahnaaiyaan raat mein?
Hai andheyraa, shama'a hee jalaa jaaiye!

Raabtaa bhee zarooree hai islaah ko!
Kam-sey-kam aaj tashreef to laaiye!!

Main jahaan huun, waheen maykadah hai, 'abd',
Arq-e-shabnam hai yeh, nosh farmaaiye!

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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2012, 10:35:20 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2012, 11:54:49 AM »
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Door sey hi, kharhey yuun na muskaaiye!
Maajaraa-e-jigar hai: idhar aaiye!!

Din guzartaa hai yuun, raat aatee hai yuun:
Husn sey apney, yeh ghar sajaa jaaiye!!

Kyoun jalaatee hain shahnaaiyaan raat mein?
Hai andheyraa, shama'a hee jalaa jaaiye!

Raabtaa bhee zarooree hai islaah ko!
Kam-sey-kam aaj tashreef to laaiye!!

Main jahaan huun, waheen maykadah hai, 'abd',
Arq-e-shabnam hai yeh, nosh farmaaiye! Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

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gud----ABD
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2012, 01:46:31 PM »
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waah ...bohat khoob....
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2012, 02:08:03 PM »
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ABD Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab... kia roomani mizaaz meiN kalaam kahi
hai waaH behad khoob... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe... Matla aur maqta khushusan hume
behad khoob laga... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rhaiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2012, 02:13:18 PM »
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Bahut khoob ABD sir
ye andaaz bhi khoob raha..
shaandaar ghazal.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2012, 08:35:55 PM »
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very nice ghazal abd bundeli jee
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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2012, 10:39:16 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2012, 01:26:44 AM »
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Shukriyah, Saini ji!
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«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2012, 01:27:59 AM »
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gud----ABD

Thanks, Khamosh!
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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2012, 01:28:48 AM »
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waah ...bohat khoob....

Shukriyah, 'laaiba' ji!
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«Reply #11 on: September 05, 2012, 01:31:11 AM »
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ABD Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab... kia roomani mizaaz meiN kalaam kahi
hai waaH behad khoob... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe... Matla aur maqta khushusan hume
behad khoob laga... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rhaiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   



Namaskaar! Shukriyah, 'ParwaaZ' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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Bahut khoob ABD sir
ye andaaz bhi khoob raha..
shaandaar ghazal.. Applause Applause

Shukriyah, Mukesh ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #13 on: September 05, 2012, 01:49:37 AM »
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very nice ghazal abd bundeli jee

Shukriyah, Suman ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #14 on: September 05, 2012, 01:51:00 AM »
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'nandbahu' ji !
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