Hasrat si dil mein hai, ki koi dilruba mile

by livingbytheday on December 20, 2012, 05:40:46 AM
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Hasrat si dil mein hai, ki koi dilruba mile
jab bhi miley jahaan bhi,bas aap sa miley
Khawabo ke aaine mein koi chehra naya sajaa
Mumkin hain raasta yahi, manzil se jaa mile

Usko talaashte hi rahe, har sans har kadam
woh bhi mile kahin toh mujhe dhundhtaa mile

hur din wahi udaasi, wahi mayuusiyan rahi
ai raat kuch to kar ki ab din nayaa mile

dhundhne mein uska pata, gum gaya hu main
bhatkaa hi de kadam, ki koi raastaa mile

ishq pe  yeh mehr hain, talaashne se yahaan
woh bhi mile hain jinka na koi pataa mile

“Deepak” ujaale din mein andhe bhatakte hain
Thoda sa kalaa dard bhadha, aashiyaan mile
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«Reply #1 on: December 20, 2012, 05:43:59 AM »
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waa waa bhot khub.
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«Reply #3 on: December 20, 2012, 06:08:08 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Deepak ji.....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: December 20, 2012, 07:56:09 AM »
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Deepka Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne badi hi umdaa kalaam kahi hai... behad
khoobsurat zameen par umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Quoted ashaar hume behad pasaNd aaye..


Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...


Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




Usko talaashte hi rahe, har sans har kadam
woh bhi mile kahin toh mujhe dhundhtaa mile

hur din wahi udaasi, wahi mayuusiyan rahi
ai raat kuch to kar ki ab din nayaa mile

ishq pe  yeh mehr hain, talaashne se yahaan
woh bhi mile hain jinka na koi pataa mile


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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2012, 08:24:02 AM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2012, 08:54:41 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2012, 11:18:06 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank you for the guidance sir
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2012, 11:23:13 AM »
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waa waa bhot khub.

thank you so much
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«Reply #9 on: December 21, 2012, 02:43:00 AM »
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Hasrat si dil mein hai, ki koi dilruba mile
jab bhi miley jahaan bhi,bas aap sa miley
Khawabo ke aaine mein koi chehra naya sajaa
Mumkin hain raasta yahi, manzil se jaa mile

Usko talaashte hi rahe, har sans har kadam
woh bhi mile kahin toh mujhe dhundhtaa mile

hur din wahi udaasi, wahi mayuusiyan rahi
ai raat kuch to kar ki ab din nayaa mile

dhundhne mein uska pata, gum gaya hu main
bhatkaa hi de kadam, ki koi raastaa mile

ishq pe  yeh mehr hain, talaashne se yahaan
woh bhi mile hain jinka na koi pataa mile

“Deepak” ujaale din mein andhe bhatakte hain
Thoda sa kalaa dard bhadha, aashiyaan mile


wah wah bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 22, 2012, 10:08:35 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Deepak ji.....!!!

bahut abhut shukriyaa
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«Reply #11 on: December 22, 2012, 03:31:22 PM »
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Bahut khoob Deepak jee
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Usko talaashte hi rahe, har sans har kadam
woh bhi mile kahin toh mujhe dhundhtaa mile

hur din wahi udaasi, wahi mayuusiyan rahi
ai raat kuch to kar ki ab din nayaa mile

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«Reply #12 on: December 22, 2012, 06:00:37 PM »
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Bahut khubsoorat kalaam hai Deepak ji. Wah wah maza aa gaya. Daad pesh karta hun.
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«Reply #13 on: December 23, 2012, 11:39:46 AM »
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Deepka Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne badi hi umdaa kalaam kahi hai... behad
khoobsurat zameen par umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Quoted ashaar hume behad pasaNd aaye..


Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...


Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




bahut bahut shukriyaa
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«Reply #14 on: December 23, 2012, 11:40:34 AM »
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Applause Applause

thank you
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