HAUSLA..-1....(K_A)

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                       jab bhi milta hai mohabbat ki duhaai detaa hai,
                       ajeeb dushman hai dosti ki gawaahi detaa hai,

                       zaraa si talkhi pey kar detey hain badnaam loag,
                       wo magar meri  ghalti ki safaai detaa hai,

                       aatey hain bazm-e-adab mein kai sukhnwar,
                       wo magar meri hi ghazal ko waah-waahi detaa hai,

                       hotaa nahin khush koi kisi ki kaamyaabi per,
                       wo magar meri  sochh ko ek gahraai detaa hai,

                       toot jaatey hain khawab bhi waqt key saath khamosh,
                       wo magar meri nazron ko  ek binaai detaa hai,

                      
                       happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9


            SUKHNWAR = POET
            BINAAI  = ROSHNI
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2010, 08:53:43 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne K_A ji...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 26, 2010, 02:13:43 AM »
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Bahut khoob KA JI
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«Reply #3 on: June 26, 2010, 09:33:53 AM »
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   Good One K_A JI Very Nice.
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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2010, 11:09:55 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2010, 03:31:14 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne K_A ji...!!!

thanx klaskar ji
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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2010, 06:52:58 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2010, 05:22:13 AM »
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Aik achchhi tehreer hai janab ye aapki. Ehsaasaat-o-jazbaat ki achchhi tarjumaani hai. Daad qubul kijiye.

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                       jab bhi milta hai mohabbat ki duhaai detaa hai,
                       ajeeb dushman hai dosti ki gawaahi detaa hai,

                       zaraa si talkhi pey kar detey hain badnaam loag,
                       wo magar meri her ghalti ki safaai detaa hai,

                       aatey hain bazm-e-adab mein kai sukh-e-anwar,
                       wo magar meri hi ghazal ko waah-waahi detaa hai,

                       hotaa nahin khush koi kisi ki kaamyaabi per,
                       wo magar meri her sochh ko ek gahraai detaa hai,

                       toot jaatey hain khawab bhi waqt key saath khamosh,
                       wo magar meri nazron ko hamesha ek binaai detaa hai,
                       
                       happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9


            SUKH-E-ANWAR = POET
            BINAAI  = ROSHNI
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«Reply #8 on: September 13, 2010, 11:17:08 AM »
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                       jab bhi milta hai mohabbat ki duhaai detaa hai,
                       ajeeb dushman hai dosti ki gawaahi detaa hai,

                       zaraa si talkhi pey kar detey hain badnaam loag,
                       wo magar meri her ghalti ki safaai detaa hai,

                       aatey hain bazm-e-adab mein kai sukh-e-anwar,
                       wo magar meri hi ghazal ko waah-waahi detaa hai,

                       hotaa nahin khush koi kisi ki kaamyaabi per,
                       wo magar meri her sochh ko ek gahraai detaa hai,

                       toot jaatey hain khawab bhi waqt key saath khamosh,
                       wo magar meri nazron ko hamesha ek binaai detaa hai,
                       
                       happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9 happy9


            SUKH-E-ANWAR = POET
            BINAAI  = ROSHNI

aapka matla sahab kisi bhi daad ka mohtaaj nahi....
itna gazab kaha hai aapne....

aur apka qaafiya 'waah waahi' bilkul taaza hai...

apki kavish bahut pasand aayi...

daad hazir hai

regards
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«Reply #9 on: February 07, 2011, 05:03:27 AM »
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Aik achchhi tehreer hai janab ye aapki. Ehsaasaat-o-jazbaat ki achchhi tarjumaani hai. Daad qubul kijiye.

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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2011, 08:12:35 AM »
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aapka matla sahab kisi bhi daad ka mohtaaj nahi....
itna gazab kaha hai aapne....

aur apka qaafiya 'waah waahi' bilkul taaza hai...

apki kavish bahut pasand aayi...

daad hazir hai

regards

THANX ZIDD SB
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