Wo Hausla To Ho........!!

by Talat on October 06, 2008, 04:20:53 PM
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This time, I am writing in a very very simple language.  


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«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2008, 05:09:00 PM »
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Talat ,
Bahoot khoob


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«Reply #2 on: October 06, 2008, 06:35:18 PM »
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Talat ,
Bahoot khoob


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Javed,

You are yourself a complete poetry institution....and getting appraisal from you means a lot. Thank You so much notworthy  notworthy

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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2008, 07:21:29 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!
Talat aapne zindagi ki kuch Kadwi sachaiyon ko humse roobaroo karwaya..

Sach mein ek aaena ki tarah thi yeh poetry...

i am speechless..bahut khoob  icon_salut
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2008, 08:21:04 PM »
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bahut haseen tarah se aap ne lika hai  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2008, 09:00:20 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!
Talat aapne zindagi ki kuch Kadwi sachaiyon ko humse roobaroo karwaya..

Sach mein ek aaena ki tarah thi yeh poetry...

i am speechless..bahut khoob  icon_salut


Aapne ise samjha aur saraha...mujhe mera inaam mil gaya Khwaish....  icon_flower Thank You so much friend.  notworthy
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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2008, 09:01:13 PM »
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bahut haseen tarah se aap ne lika hai  Clapping Smiley

Bohot bohot shukriya Sonal  Usual Smile  Thankyou !
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«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2008, 06:38:57 AM »
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Celmira ji,
Your CAUTION against Pseudo Loftiness is highly commendable! Congrats.
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«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2008, 07:31:48 AM »
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Celmira ji,
Your CAUTION against Pseudo Loftiness is highly commendable! Congrats.
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Abd Ji,

I am honored to have such comments from a towering personality like yours.  notworthy notworthy notworthy

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«Reply #9 on: October 07, 2008, 07:51:24 AM »
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Celmira (Talat) ji,
Aur kyaa kahoon? Zarrah nawaazee key liye shukriyaa!
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«Reply #10 on: October 07, 2008, 01:59:26 PM »
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The pleasure is mine, Abd Ji Usual Smile ....!!
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«Reply #11 on: October 07, 2008, 05:36:47 PM »
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Thanks Celmira (Talat) ji,
Apnee eik puraanee gazal key do asha'ar peish hain, mulaahizah farmaayen:

Mein khojtaa firaa hoon dahroun, usey, jahaan mein:
Koyee to bataa deytaa, 'Us ka maqaam yah hai'?
Kissey suney hain ham ney, bas, mehrabaaniyoun key!
Nazr-e-karam ko, ab bhi, mushtaaq yah nigah hai!

                                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #12 on: October 07, 2008, 05:46:47 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Abd Ji


Ye Jahan chhota tha uski za'at samane ke liye
Humara hausla dekho, dil main maqaam de baithe !!
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«Reply #13 on: October 07, 2008, 07:34:39 PM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai Celmira sis  .. Applause Applause Thumbs UP


Bohat khoob likha hai Abd ji... Applause
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«Reply #14 on: October 07, 2008, 08:47:45 PM »
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Thanks Celmira (Talat) ji,
Apnee eik puraanee gazal key do asha'ar peish hain, mulaahizah farmaayen:

Mein khojtaa firaa hoon dahroun, usey, jahaan mein:
Koyee to bataa deytaa, 'Us ka maqaam yah hai'?
Kissey suney hain ham ney, bas, mehrabaaniyoun key!
Nazr-e-karam ko, ab bhi, mushtaaq yah nigah hai!

                                - abd bundeli

Bahut Khoob Abdbundeli ji.. Applause Applause
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