intezaar me unke umr apni

by Bulla Ki Jaana on April 07, 2005, 03:01:30 PM
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intezaar me unke umr apni tamaam kar chale
khayaal-o-tasawwur me, sehar se shaam kar chale

deedaar-e-rukh-e-maahwash pe maahaul-e-jashn-e-iid hota
apni holi deewaali bhi unke naam kar chale

sirf yaadon ke sahaare jee nahin paate ham
unke peechhe ek tasveer ka intezaam kar chale

le aaye dhoondh kar unko jahaan-e-kharaab se
yaad rakhegi duniyaa ham jo kaam kar chale

musaafir is safar me ab na raat hogi
jab noor-e-jahaan ham khud thaam kar chale
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thycreator
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2005, 03:05:25 PM »
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Wow.......thats a beauty........congrats if its ur creation dear and welcome to yoindia...
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Bulla Ki Jaana
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2005, 03:09:49 PM »
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Thanks Buddy ....... count on me, its original ...
Inshallah, many such will follow .......
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thycreator
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2005, 03:14:38 PM »
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Hmmmmmmmm.......do lemme know abt ur posts, i will love to follow them,

Tumhari pratibha ke hum kayal hue ye mante hai hum,
Tum jaise kam hai yahan ye jante hai hum,
Tahe dil se swagat hai iss mehfil mein tera aye dost,
Hum bhi paarkhi hai, heere ko pehchante hai hum.;-)
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Bulla Ki Jaana
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2005, 03:20:47 PM »
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tht was really quick .... jaldi aaye aur kaafi durust aaye ...
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thycreator
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2005, 03:29:55 PM »
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Hmmmmmmmm......aap accha likhte hai agar ye apne likhi hai toh.......bas itna yad rakhiye ki dont be proud of it........humbleness is a must...wo suna hoga,
Poocha hai kisko dunia ne do char ke sivay,
Lakhon hue dafan yahan fan liye hue......happy9
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2005, 03:43:07 PM »
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thnx for reminding tht ..... mashallah aap ki haazir jawaabi ke kaayal ho rahe hain ham rafta rafta ...

mere khayal kuchh milte julte hain is baabat .. insaan bhale hi pahunch jaaye chand par ... lekin rehna to hai use isi zameen par ....
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2005, 03:50:12 PM »
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Hmmmm..mujhe khushi hui ki apko ehsas hai iss bat ka.....apke bat se hame bhi pura ittefaq hai.......likhte rahiye aise hi accha....gud wishes..
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