is raah e teeragi men yahi................ufaq

by ufaq on December 24, 2012, 07:16:32 PM
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is raahe teeragi men yahi ik habeeb hai.
bijli ka chamakna mere sar ke qareeb hai.
 
dard e hayaat us pe ye naale bhi naarasaa,
ab kisko main kahu ki wo mujh sa ghareeb hai.

naahaq hai khudkushi pe ye ilzaame buzdili,
jo khud ko maar de wo balaa ka naqeeb hai.

deede falak-nawardee ki lazzat chalai gayi,
to kya huya qafas men agar andaleeb hai.

main haal apna kisko kahu,kya kahu,kaho,
mushkil yahaan pe fark e habeeb o raqeeb hai.

raste men paaya mujhko to rasta badal gayaa,
uske o mere beech men kuch to ajeeb hai.

mil baant ke adu hame rahnaa hai umr bhar,
tu khushnaseeb hai ki ufaq kamnaseeb hai.
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«Reply #1 on: December 24, 2012, 07:21:56 PM »
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bahut umda likha hai saahab, meri dili daad aur ek rau qubool farmaaiye.... umeed karta huN aane wale waqt meN aapse aur qalamkaari dekhne ko milegi...!!
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«Reply #2 on: December 24, 2012, 07:24:22 PM »
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waah waah waah
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«Reply #3 on: December 24, 2012, 07:57:45 PM »
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naahaq hai khudkushi pe ye ilzaame buzdili,
jo khud ko maar de wo balaa ka naqeeb hai.

main haal apna kisko kahu,kya kahu,kaho,
mushkil yahaan pe fark e habeeb o raqeeb hai.

mil baant ke adu hame rahnaa hai umr bhar,
tu khushnaseeb hai ki ufaq kamnaseeb hai.

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Kya baat hai..bahut umda likha hai aapne

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«Reply #4 on: December 24, 2012, 08:38:00 PM »
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bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai ufaq saheb . bahut mubarak ho.
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«Reply #5 on: December 24, 2012, 08:47:06 PM »
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badi hi pyaari gazhal rahi mubarakbad qubool kare
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«Reply #6 on: December 25, 2012, 06:26:44 AM »
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ufaq saheb nihayat umda ghazal kahi aapne , sabhi ashaar lajwab rahe , wah wah wah

raste men paaya mujhko to rasta badal gayaa,

uske o mere beech men kuch to ajeeb hai.


daaad qubool karen


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«Reply #7 on: December 25, 2012, 09:43:53 AM »
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Ufaq sahab adaab. Bahut khubsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne. Takhayyul ki bari unchi uraan bhari hai aapne. Daad pesh karta hun.Haan magar matle ke dusre misre par nazre saani kar lein usme mujhe kuchh diqqat mehsoos ho rai hai. is raahe teeragi men yahi ik habeeb hai. (bijli ka chamakna mere sar ke qareeb hai.)

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«Reply #8 on: December 25, 2012, 11:08:11 AM »
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is raahe teeragi men yahi ik habeeb hai.
bijli ka chamakna mere sar ke qareeb hai.
 
dard e hayaat us pe ye naale bhi naarasaa,
ab kisko main kahu ki wo mujh sa ghareeb hai.

naahaq hai khudkushi pe ye ilzaame buzdili,
jo khud ko maar de wo balaa ka naqeeb hai.

deede falak-nawardee ki lazzat chalai gayi,
to kya huya qafas men agar andaleeb hai.

main haal apna kisko kahu,kya kahu,kaho,
mushkil yahaan pe fark e habeeb o raqeeb hai.

raste men paaya mujhko to rasta badal gayaa,
uske o mere beech men kuch to ajeeb hai.

mil baant ke adu hame rahnaa hai umr bhar,
tu khushnaseeb hai ki ufaq kamnaseeb hai.


gr888888888888888,sir
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«Reply #9 on: December 25, 2012, 02:36:05 PM »
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Ufaq Sahaab Aadaab!

Behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab waaH ... bade hi dilfareb aur
umdaa khayaaloN ko kafi pura asar lafz diye haiN aapne... Usual Smile


Sabhi ashaar Mashaa Allaah behad umdaa rahe... HUmari dheroN dili
daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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«Reply #10 on: December 26, 2012, 01:38:47 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2012, 11:31:38 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #12 on: December 27, 2012, 09:09:12 PM »
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waah waah, bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal
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