Jaagtey-jaagtey beetee hai raat yah bhee to!

by abdbundeli on April 18, 2012, 07:51:55 PM
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Neend haaree hai, uneendee hai raat yah bhee to!
Jaagtey-jaagtey beetee hai raat yah bhee to!!

Na sahee jaam-e-wasl, jaam-e-hijra hee peeley:
Shabnam-e-ashk ko peetee hai raat yah bhee to!

Bulbuleyn chup hain, andaleeb chup huye saarey;
Reetatey-reetatey, reetee hai raat yah bhee to!!

Koun seetaa hai pairaahan barahnh* roohoun key?
Pairaahan, har lamhey, seetee hai raat yah bhee to!!

Shahad hai, tum ho agar saath; wagarnaa, mahboob,
Mirch key ark-see teetee hai raat yah bhee to!!

Baarahaa ishq mein jeetey hain, 'abd', woh; leykin,
Haar kar baarahaa, jeetee hai raat yah bhee to!

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                  - abd bundeli

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«Reply #1 on: April 18, 2012, 08:26:41 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: April 18, 2012, 08:37:38 PM »
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ati sunder sir ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2012, 08:47:44 PM »
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Lots of thanks, Anahita ji!
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«Reply #4 on: April 18, 2012, 08:49:03 PM »
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ati sunder sir ji

Dhanyawaad Dr. Saini ji! Sapariwaar khush rahiye!
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«Reply #5 on: April 18, 2012, 09:00:16 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob abdbundeli ji..bahut sundar..:)wrds tough lagey iss mei...zada urdu aati nahi..waise  consultd ...:)so understood.....clappings....
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«Reply #6 on: April 19, 2012, 01:03:03 AM »
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very nice....daad kabool kare. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: April 19, 2012, 10:31:38 AM »
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Bundeli sirji--
itne khubsurat aur kamaal ke alfaaz aapki ghazal me hoti h ki bas--
dil jhoom uthta hai
hats off to u sirji--
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«Reply #8 on: April 19, 2012, 10:43:40 AM »
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Neend haaree hai, uneendee hai raat yah bhee to!
Jaagtey-jaagtey beetee hai raat yah bhee to!!

Na sahee jaam-e-wasl, jaam-e-hijra hee peeley:
Shabnam-e-ashk ko peetee hai raat yah bhee to!

Bulbuleyn chup hain, andaleeb chup huye saarey;
Reetatey-reetatey, reetee hai raat yah bhee to!!

Koun seetaa hai pairaahan barahnh* roohoun key?
Pairaahan, har lamhey, seetee hai raat yah bhee to!!

Shahad hai, tum ho agar saath; wagarnaa, mahboob,
Mirch key ark-see teetee hai raat yah bhee to!!

Baarahaa ishq mein jeetey hain, 'abd', woh; leykin,
Haar kar baarahaa, jeetee hai raat yah bhee to!

* Naked, Nangeen, Nirwastra

                  - abd bundeli


Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut hi behtrien gazal abd ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2012, 04:41:38 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob abdbundeli ji..bahut sundar..:)wrds tough lagey iss mei...zada urdu aati nahi..waise  consultd ...:)so understood.....clappings....

Shukriyah Dolly ji! Aapko takleef gawaarah karnee parhee, mua'af keejiyegaa!
               
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very nice....daad kabool kare. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'injured.warrior' ji!
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«Reply #11 on: April 19, 2012, 04:44:38 PM »
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Bundeli sirji--
itne khubsurat aur kamaal ke alfaaz aapki ghazal me hoti h ki bas--
dil jhoom uthta hai
hats off to u sirji--


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'sarfira' ji!
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«Reply #12 on: April 19, 2012, 04:45:46 PM »
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Bahut hi behtrien gazal abd ji


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Pankaj ji!
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