Jaam hai, wasl key alaawaa bhee!

by abdbundeli on September 01, 2012, 05:56:10 AM
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Dour-e-baaraan bhi hai, bulaawaa bhee!
Jaam hai, wasl key alaawaa bhee!!

Aab-e-kousar hai zeyhn par haabee,
Khuld-e-imkaan kaa chhalaawaa bhee!

Hai rawaan dil mein, jigar mein aatish;
To kaheen mubtahij hai laawaa bhee!

Abra hee abra hain nigaahoun mein;
Aur sailaab-e-nou kaa daawaa bhee!

Aik tuu hi naheen wadeed unkaa!
Hain kayee, 'abd' key alaawaa bhee!!

       - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2012, 06:08:41 AM »
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Kya baat hai ABD Sir
Bahut umda..
sabhi ashaar..behatreen par..
2nd sher aur maqte ka javaab naheen.
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2012, 07:07:53 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on September 01, 2012, 06:08:41 AM
Kya baat hai ABD Sir
Bahut umda..
sabhi ashaar..behatreen par..
2nd sher aur maqte ka javaab naheen.
Applause Applause

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'mkv' ji!
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2012, 07:53:50 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2012, 09:00:43 AM »
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Dour-e-baaraan bhi hai, bulaawaa bhee!
Jaam hai, wasl key alaawaa bhee!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aab-e-kousar hai zeyhn par haabee,
Khuld-e-imkaan kaa chhalaawaa bhee!iss sher pey main ekhtalaaf rakhta hoon. per aapki soch kya hai aap hi isey bayaan kar sakte hain...mazeed
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Hai rawaan dil mein, jigar mein aatish;
To kaheen mubtahij hai laawaa bhee! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Abra hee abra hain nigaahoun mein;
Aur sailaab-e-nou kaa daawaa bhee! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aik tuu hi naheen wadeed unkaa!
Hain kayee, 'abd' key alaawaa bhee!! Applause Applause Applause Applause

       - abd bundeli



gudssssssssssssssss-ABD
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2012, 12:34:18 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on September 01, 2012, 07:53:50 AM
bahut khoob

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'nandbahu' ji!
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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2012, 04:11:27 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on September 01, 2012, 09:00:43 AM

gudssssssssssssssss-ABD

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Khamosh ji!
"Aab-e-kousar hai zeyhn par haabee,
Khuld-e-imkaan kaa chhalaawaa bhee!"
Yahaan 'aslee khuld' sey alag aik 'imaginary khuld' kaa bayaan hai! Ham (apney 'karm' par wichaar kiye binaa hee), 'wine of heaven' tathaa 'heaven' key sukhon ko paaney kaa 'chhalaawaa' paaltey hain! 
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«Reply #7 on: September 01, 2012, 04:22:08 PM »
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Khamosh ji!
"Aab-e-kousar hai zeyhn par haabee,
Khuld-e-imkaan kaa chhalaawaa bhee!"
Yahaan 'aslee khuld' sey alag aik 'imaginary khuld' kaa bayaan hai! Ham (apney 'karm' par wichaar kiye binaa hee), 'wine of heaven' tathaa 'heaven' key sukhon ko paaney kaa 'chhalaawaa' paaltey hain! 

ye to phir naummidii wali baat hai. main gunahgaar hoon phir bhi ALLAH se behtri ki talab krta hoon. iss liye main iss sher sey qatayee ittefaq nahin rakhta. ye kufr ko isharaa karta hai janaab.iss liye mazeed iss baat pey main koi hujjat nahin karo.n gaa icon_silent icon_silent
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«Reply #8 on: September 01, 2012, 04:55:56 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on September 01, 2012, 04:22:08 PM
ye to phir naummidii wali baat hai. main gunahgaar hoon phir bhi ALLAH se behtri ki talab krta hoon. iss liye main iss sher sey qatayee ittefaq nahin rakhta. ye kufr ko isharaa karta hai janaab.iss liye mazeed iss baat pey main koi hujjat nahin karo.n gaa icon_silent icon_silent
Khamosh ji, yeh sher-o-shayari hai! Janab Asadulla Khan 'Galib' kaa  aik sher aapkee nazar kar rahaa huun:
"Humko maloom hai jannat ki haqeeqat leykin,
Dil ko khush rakhney ka 'Galib' yeh khyaal accha hai."
Sher kee doosaree line mujhey theek sey yaad naheen hai, shaayad yah ho:
Dil key bahlaaney ko 'Galib' yeh khayaal achchhaa hai!
Iskey baad bhi yadi aapko meyrey sher mein 'kufra' kaa ishaaraa nazar aayegaa, to main apnee gazal sey usey hataa doongaa!
  
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«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2012, 06:12:55 PM »
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Khamosh ji, yeh sher-o-shayari hai! Janab Asadulla Khan 'Galib' kaa  aik sher aapkee nazar kar rahaa huun:
"Humko maloom hai jannat ki haqeeqat leykin,
Dil ko khush rakhney ka 'Galib' yeh khyaal accha hai."
Sher kee doosaree line mujhey theek sey yaad naheen hai, shaayad yah ho:
Dil key bahlaaney ko 'Galib' yeh khayaal achchhaa hai!
Iskey baad bhi yadi aapko meyrey sher mein 'kufra' kaa ishaaraa nazar aayegaa, to main apnee gazal sey usey hataa doongaa!
 



main bakhoobii janta hoon janaab aur mujhey ummid thii aap ka jawaab bhi yehi hoga to ghalib sahab ek shayar they koi auliya ekraam nahin aur maine kabhi iss sher ko appreciate nahin kiya

aur haan nida faazlii ka ek sher shayad aapney bhi sunaa hoga

                ghar sey masjid hai bahut door chlo yunn kar lein
                kisi rotey huey bachchey ko hansayaa jaaye.!!

main iss tarah ke kisi bhi kalaam ko zarur tanqeed karta hoon

baharkaif ye aap ka apna phail hai.

iss liye sher-o-shari ke hadd ki mayaar zarur rakhni chahiye.

marhoom saghar khayaami sahab ney toranto mein bahut sey kalaam padhey they jisme bada objectionable sher they.

ab merey jaise bewakoof loag sirf sher-o-shayri kah kar nahin taal tey hain... mujey maaf karein

ABD sb aap to MASHAALLAH bahut khoob likha kartey hain buss issi ek sher mein mujey aitraaz hai . Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: September 01, 2012, 09:38:43 PM »
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very very nice!!
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2012, 05:03:23 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on September 01, 2012, 06:12:55 PM


main bakhoobii janta hoon janaab aur mujhey ummid thii aap ka jawaab bhi yehi hoga to ghalib sahab ek shayar they koi auliya ekraam nahin aur maine kabhi iss sher ko appreciate nahin kiya

aur haan nida faazlii ka ek sher shayad aapney bhi sunaa hoga

                ghar sey masjid hai bahut door chlo yunn kar lein
                kisi rotey huey bachchey ko hansayaa jaaye.!!

main iss tarah ke kisi bhi kalaam ko zarur tanqeed karta hoon

baharkaif ye aap ka apna phail hai.

iss liye sher-o-shari ke hadd ki mayaar zarur rakhni chahiye.

marhoom saghar khayaami sahab ney toranto mein bahut sey kalaam padhey they jisme bada objectionable sher they.

ab merey jaise bewakoof loag sirf sher-o-shayri kah kar nahin taal tey hain... mujey maaf karein

ABD sb aap to MASHAALLAH bahut khoob likha kartey hain buss issi ek sher mein mujey aitraaz hai . Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

Khamosh ji,
Main to 'uskey' maykhaaney kaa rind huun (Haalaanki, mainey, dawaaoun mein shaamil 'alcohol' key alaawaa, kabhee bhee sharaab naheen pee hai)! Zaahid-o-Waaiz-o-Naaseh ki 'wiraadaree' sey bhi, 'aik teacher' honey key naatey, meyrey khaasey achchhey taa'lluqaat rahey hain, aur hain bhee! Par, mujhey aap jaisaa 'deen' kaa, is had tak paawand, sirf doosaree baar hee 'nazar-e-zeyhn' mein aayaa hai! Pahley janaab Mohommad saahab they, jinsey ki, isee 'yoindia' par meyree mulaaqaat huyee thee: unhain to 'sharaab' key lafz sey bhee aitraaz thaa!
Mujhey khushee hai, ki, 'deen-o-Quraan pak' key aap jaisey 'aslee zaahid' bhee, shayaron kee is jama'at mein moujood hain!
WOH aapko seyhatmand rakhey wa lambee khush-haal umra ataa karey!  
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2012, 05:09:29 AM »
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Quote from: Sps on September 01, 2012, 09:38:43 PM
very very nice!!

Shukriyaa 'Sps' ji!
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«Reply #13 on: September 02, 2012, 07:30:51 AM »
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very nice ghazal abdbundeli jee
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«Reply #14 on: September 02, 2012, 02:38:52 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on September 02, 2012, 07:30:51 AM
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very nice ghazal abdbundeli jee

Thanks, Suman ji!
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