Jal gaya hoga...~Shoaib~

by admani on March 17, 2014, 09:42:29 PM

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Baarish tham gayi hogi, aasmaan machal gaya hoga
Tumhe dekh kar tou chaand bhi jal gaya hoga

Koi nashay mein choor agar gir raha hoga
Woh bhi tumhe dekh kar sambhal gaya hoga

Aur tumhaari nazar-e-karam jis par pari hogi
Uska dil wahin pe dhal gaya hoga

Yeh be-khudi, yeh intezaar be-waja nahi 'Shoaib'
Kuch tou mera bhi dil phisal gaya hoga

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Re: Jal gaya hoga...~Shoaib~

«Reply #1 on: March 17, 2014, 10:41:52 PM »

wah wah wah bohut khub


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Re: Jal gaya hoga...~Shoaib~

«Reply #2 on: March 18, 2014, 03:53:11 AM »

Quote from: admani on March 17, 2014, 09:42:29 PM

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So nice.


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Re: Jal gaya hoga...~Shoaib~

«Reply #3 on: March 18, 2014, 12:28:54 PM »

waah waah


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Re: Jal gaya hoga...~Shoaib~

«Reply #4 on: March 18, 2014, 01:25:23 PM »

very nice


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Re: Jal gaya hoga...~Shoaib~

«Reply #5 on: March 18, 2014, 01:38:41 PM »

waah waah


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Re: Jal gaya hoga...~Shoaib~

«Reply #7 on: March 18, 2014, 02:08:27 PM »

Koi nashay mein choor agar gir raha hoga
Woh bhi tumhe dekh kar sambhal gaya hoga
bahoot bahoot khoob


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Re: Jal gaya hoga...~Shoaib~

«Reply #8 on: March 18, 2014, 02:34:20 PM »

Yeh be-khudi, yeh intezaar be-waja nahi 'Shoaib'
Kuch tou mera bhi dil phisal gaya hoga

bahut khoob


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Re: Jal gaya hoga...~Shoaib~

«Reply #9 on: March 18, 2014, 04:50:01 PM »

nyc effort


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Re: Jal gaya hoga...~Shoaib~

«Reply #10 on: March 18, 2014, 08:10:19 PM »

Shoaib ji khooooooooobsurat ehsaas sabhi ashaar mein... dil ko chooo gayi aapki yeh ghazal... lajawab peshkash rahi... hazaron hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega...khaas yeh do sher bahut pasand aaye..

Aur tumhaari nazar-e-karam jis par pari hogi
Uska dil wahin pe dhal gaya hoga

Yeh be-khudi, yeh intezaar be-waja nahi 'Shoaib'
Kuch tou mera bhi dil phisal gaya hoga
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