jang thehri thi meri

by a.r.hashmi on December 26, 2012, 09:39:40 AM
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Jang Thehri thi Meri, Gardish-e-Taqdeer k sath,,

Main Qafas may b Uljhta raha, Zanjeer k sath,.

Agr is Khuwab ki Ta'beer, Judai hay to phir,,

Hum to Marr jayn gay,
is Khuwab ki Ta'beer k sath,.

Rooh Aa'bad karo
gay, to Ba'dan Ujrray ga,,

Ek Kharabi b Janam leti hay, Ta'meer k sath,.

Aisa Qatil hay Maseeha k,
Ba-Andaaz-e-Junoun,,

Dil ko Dil say b Milata hay,
to Shamsher k sath,.

Aankh ab k b Barsta hoa, Badal Thehri,

Chand ab k b Nazar aaya hay, Ta'kheer k sath..!

¥BRØKEÑ HEÅRT¥
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2012, 09:55:47 AM »
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Jang Thehri thi Meri, Gardish-e-Taqdeer k sath,,

Main Qafas may b Uljhta raha, Zanjeer k sath,.

Agr is Khuwab ki Ta'beer, Judai hay to phir,,

Hum to Marr jayn gay,
is Khuwab ki Ta'beer k sath,.

Rooh Aa'bad karo
gay, to Ba'dan Ujrray ga,,

Ek Kharabi b Janam leti hay, Ta'meer k sath,.

Aisa Qatil hay Maseeha k,
Ba-Andaaz-e-Junoun,,

Dil ko Dil say b Milata hay,
to Shamsher k sath,.

Aankh ab k b Barsta hoa, Badal Thehri,

Chand ab k b Nazar aaya hay, Ta'kheer k sath..!

¥BRØKEÑ HEÅRT¥

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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2012, 10:12:56 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2012, 11:11:21 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 26, 2012, 11:13:50 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2012, 11:58:00 AM »
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KYA  KHUBSURAT  GHAZAL  HAI  HASHMI SAHEB . DHERON  DAAD .
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2012, 12:58:33 PM »
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Jang Thehri thi Meri, Gardish-e-Taqdeer k sath,,

Main Qafas may b Uljhta raha, Zanjeer k sath,.

Agr is Khuwab ki Ta'beer, Judai hay to phir,,

Hum to Marr jayn gay,
is Khuwab ki Ta'beer k sath,.

Rooh Aa'bad karo
gay, to Ba'dan Ujrray ga,,

Ek Kharabi b Janam leti hay, Ta'meer k sath,.

Aisa Qatil hay Maseeha k,
Ba-Andaaz-e-Junoun,,

Dil ko Dil say b Milata hay,
to Shamsher k sath,.

Aankh ab k b Barsta hoa, Badal Thehri,

Chand ab k b Nazar aaya hay, Ta'kheer k sath..!

¥BRØKEÑ HEÅRT¥




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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2012, 12:08:05 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2012, 08:54:08 PM »
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waah bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal
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«Reply #10 on: December 28, 2012, 10:48:30 AM »
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ma siwaye shukria k kia kahon, hala'n k ye lafz chota hy magar phir b qabool kijiye, sab k naam nai likh raha is k liye mazrat, aap tamaam ka tahay dil se mashkoor hon.
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«Reply #11 on: December 28, 2012, 11:23:30 AM »
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ati sundar Applause Applause
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