Jharhee barsaat ki jaaree hai, ab to hosh mein aaou!

by abdbundeli on July 22, 2009, 03:20:49 PM
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Jharhee barsaat ki jaaree hai, ab to hosh mein aaou!
Mukhaatib hun, na jhijhako, muntazir aagosh mein aaou!

Azal sey deykhtaa hun rah, kharhaa aankheyn garhaaye mein;
Bahaaney tark saarey, surmayee firdos mein aaou!

Sadaa suntey naheen ho;  mein bulaataa rahaa hun daharoun;
Dikhaaou garmjoshee, nisf shab khaamosh mein aaou!

Na deykho khwaab kousar key; yaheen hain bahut maykhaaney;
Bulaataa hai tumhain saqqee! Kahaan ho? Josh mein aaou!

Tumhaarey saath honey key liye, beychain hun kab kaa?
'Abd', tum ko qasam hai, mahfil-e-maynosh mein aaou!  

                                 - abd bundeli
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2009, 03:23:22 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob uncle ji
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2009, 03:25:28 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 22, 2009, 03:23:22 PM
Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob uncle ji
Thanks a lot, Roja!
          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2009, 12:30:04 AM »
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Wah Abd ji very nice and wonderful creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 23, 2009, 07:45:24 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 23, 2009, 12:30:04 AM
Wah Abd ji very nice and wonderful creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
Thanks a lot Madhu!
              - abd bundeli
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cara
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«Reply #5 on: July 23, 2009, 07:56:16 AM »
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lagaataar baarish ho rahi hai,
mausam mast hai ab toh mood banaou.

kab se baithey hain tere intezaar main,
dub jaaye may ki dariya mein,chale aaou.

wahin na baithke dekho khwaab jannat ke,yahaan bhi bahut hai maykhaaney,
saqqee bula rahen hai tumhen,garmjoshi main chup-chap chale aaou.

bechain hun kab ka ,tumhaare saath honey ke liye,
dil na jalaaou,may ki mahfil main chale aaou.
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«Reply #6 on: July 23, 2009, 09:40:30 AM »
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Quote from: cara on July 23, 2009, 07:56:16 AM
lagaataar baarish ho rahi hai,
mausam mast hai ab toh mood banaou.

kab se baithey hain tere intezaar main,
dub jaaye may ki dariya mein,chale aaou.

wahin na baithke dekho khwaab jannat ke,yahaan bhi bahut hai maykhaaney,
saqqee bula rahen hai tumhen,garmjoshi main chup-chap chale aaou.

bechain hun kab ka ,tumhaare saath honey ke liye,
dil na jalaaou,may ki mahfil main chale aaou.

Jaaree hai sadaa baarhaa: "Aanaa hi parheygaa!"
Saaqee ney bulaayaa hai, to, jaanaa hi parheygaa!
Aagosh mein nihaan hun sanam key; zaraa ruko!
Yah mousam-e-baaraan hai, pilaanaa bhi parheygaa!!

                                 - abd bundeli
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shayara
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«Reply #7 on: July 23, 2009, 10:16:00 AM »
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Abd Sahab,

Bohot Khoob likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2009, 02:32:44 PM »
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Quote from: Shayara on July 23, 2009, 10:16:00 AM
Abd Sahab,

Bohot Khoob likha hai aapne.
Thanks a lot Shayara ji!
              - abd bundeli
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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: July 23, 2009, 02:37:02 PM »
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Good going Cara ji and Uncle ji  Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 23, 2009, 02:43:29 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on July 23, 2009, 10:29:04 AM
bahot khoob likha hai Abd ji  Applause Applause Applause

awesome ghazal

hamesha ki tarah behtareen ashaar likhe hain,bahot umda
Thanks @kaash ji!
         - abd bundeli
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«Reply #11 on: July 23, 2009, 02:45:37 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 23, 2009, 02:37:02 PM
Good going Cara ji and Uncle ji  Applause
Thanks Roja! But why just this formality?
                            - abd bundeli
         
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