Jiyaa hun baar-baar main!

by abdbundeli on October 27, 2013, 08:51:52 PM
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Sanam terey diyaar mein;
Jiyaa hun baar-baar main!

Zama’at mein shareek huun;
Kamee hai eitibaar mein!

Na jaaney kis talaash mein,
Rahaa hun beyqaraar main?

Khizaan hai meyri hamsafar,
Haseen noubahaar mein!

Ajeeb-saa sukoon hai,
Azaab-e-beyshumaar mein!

Ajab-see kheenchtaan hai:
‘Abd’ key baadahkhwaar mein?

               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: October 27, 2013, 11:28:28 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 27, 2013, 11:57:49 PM »
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Zama’at mein shareek huun;
Kamee hai eitibaar mein!

Khizaan hai meyri hamsafar,
Haseen noubahaar mein!

Behad hi umdah ghazal Abd sahab .... meri jaanib se aap ko dheron daad !!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 28, 2013, 12:46:07 AM »
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Na jaaney kis talaash mein,
Rahaa hun beyqaraar main?

Khizaan hai meyri hamsafar,
Haseen noubahaar mein!

Ajeeb-saa sukoon hai,
Azaab-e-beyshumaar mein!

Bahut khoob Sir
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«Reply #4 on: October 28, 2013, 03:56:00 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on October 27, 2013, 11:28:28 PM
bahut khoob

Shukriyah!
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«Reply #5 on: October 28, 2013, 03:56:43 PM »
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Quote from: zarraa on October 27, 2013, 11:57:49 PM
Zama’at mein shareek huun;
Kamee hai eitibaar mein!

Khizaan hai meyri hamsafar,
Haseen noubahaar mein!

Behad hi umdah ghazal Abd sahab .... meri jaanib se aap ko dheron daad !!!


Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #6 on: October 28, 2013, 03:57:39 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on October 28, 2013, 12:46:07 AM
Na jaaney kis talaash mein,
Rahaa hun beyqaraar main?

Khizaan hai meyri hamsafar,
Haseen noubahaar mein!

Ajeeb-saa sukoon hai,
Azaab-e-beyshumaar mein!

Bahut khoob Sir

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Mukesh ji!
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«Reply #7 on: October 28, 2013, 04:49:11 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 27, 2013, 08:51:52 PM
Sanam terey diyaar mein;
Jiyaa hun baar-baar main!

Zama’at mein shareek huun;
Kamee hai eitibaar mein!

Na jaaney kis talaash mein,
Rahaa hun beyqaraar main?

Khizaan hai meyri hamsafar,
Haseen noubahaar mein!

Ajeeb-saa sukoon hai,
Azaab-e-beyshumaar mein!

Ajab-see kheenchtaan hai:
‘Abd’ key baadahkhwaar mein?

               - abd bundeli


Waahhhh Abd saahab jawaab nahi is khoobsurt ghazal kaa.... daad pesh hain..

sidra
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«Reply #8 on: October 28, 2013, 06:37:06 PM »
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abd ji bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2013, 01:27:38 AM »
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Waahhhh Abd saahab jawaab nahi is khoobsurt ghazal kaa.... daad pesh hain..
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Sidra ji!
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«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2013, 01:28:41 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 28, 2013, 06:37:06 PM
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abd ji bahut khoob

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suresh ji!
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«Reply #11 on: November 03, 2013, 03:41:42 PM »
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Abd jii Kya kahe bss OUTSTANDING..!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: November 03, 2013, 09:03:20 PM »
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Abd jii Kya kahe bss OUTSTANDING..!!!!

Loads of thanks, Saman ji!
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«Reply #14 on: November 03, 2013, 11:11:14 PM »
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Ur most welcome jii...

May HE bless you! Happy Diwali!
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