jo dikhaye ghaltiyan sher mein..........Sadiq Rizvi

Tamanna ji
There are few rules to be followed in poetry for example.....After reading my ghazal,Shebaji wrote "mat kar dil ko uddas abb...kuch pyaar ki baat kar" Very simple and it's not even in meter that's why it's called TUKBANDI It must be like this " Na too dil ko apne udaas kar.....
Kabhi pyar vyar ki baat kar" You sing it in your mind then you will find the difference between TUKBANDI & good POETRY

khili thi kali pichle saal jo,     Jo kali khili thi gaye baras
uss bahaar ki baat kar,            Ussi pur bahar ki baat kar

                                   jo dikhaye ghaltiyan sher mein
                                   Na too aise yaar ki baat kar

                                                      Sadiq Rizvi