jo tune faisle faasle bhadhane,,,,,,,,,ghazal,,,,,jeet jainam

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mujhe kehti thi tu phool hai mere baag ka,
aaj murjha kar mujhe,sare sapne tod diye hai

din gujrte hai mere mer mer ke aaj kal,
ho na kisi ke sath eysa kabhi jo,hume pal diye hai,

tu ban gayi dhadkan kisi or ke dil ki,
haye mere todke sare armaan tune,hume ashq diye hai

karti rahi mohhobat ke daave humse,or aaj
karke julfo ke jaal tune,aashiq keel pitaari kiye hai,

teri banke naiya tughe paar lagya karte they,tune
karke raaz samunder par,hume sune kinaare diye hai,

tu hi thi mere lekho ki chadti chadni sanam,
yuh banke kisi ka chaand,hume tanha sitare diye hai,

jo tune faisle faasle bhadhane wale kiye hai,hume
manjoor hai per tare faisle ne,hume dard bhi diye hai,

acha sila mila mughe jo mohhobat ki tumse,zaalim
jo zakham diye mohhobat main,jeet ne khud seeye hai,
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bade pursoz ehsaasaat hain jeet ji ... bahaut khoob !
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«Reply #7 on: May 04, 2014, 11:25:24 PM »
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mujhe kehti thi tu phool hai mere baag ka,
aaj murjha kar mujhe,sare sapne tod diye hai

din gujrte hai mere mer mer ke aaj kal,
ho na kisi ke sath eysa kabhi jo,hume pal diye hai,

tu ban gayi dhadkan kisi or ke dil ki,
haye mere todke sare armaan tune,hume ashq diye hai

karti rahi mohhobat ke daave humse,or aaj
karke julfo ke jaal tune,aashiq keel pitaari kiye hai,

teri banke naiya tughe paar lagya karte they,tune
karke raaz samunder par,hume sune kinaare diye hai,

tu hi thi mere lekho ki chadti chadni sanam,
yuh banke kisi ka chaand,hume tanha sitare diye hai,

jo tune faisle faasle bhadhane wale kiye hai,hume
manjoor hai per tare faisle ne,hume dard bhi diye hai,

acha sila mila mughe jo mohhobat ki tumse,zaalim
jo zakham diye mohhobat main,jeet ne khud seeye hai,

Bahut khoob.!!
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Wah bahut hi badhiya... Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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