KAARVAN OR KAAFILAN

by ASHUNAVAL on July 02, 2009, 03:55:40 PM
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Hum bhi chale tha karvan me le k apna kaafilan
jyo jyo hum aage bade sab chootte chale gaye

Log milte gaye har raaston me bheed me
fir jakhm aise de gaye hum tootte chale gaye

Teri muhabbat me sazaai hum ne jitni doliyan
tum dushmano k sang mil k lootte chale gaye

Har saans me umeed thi tu aayega ik din jaroor
tinke ka sahara liye hum doobte chale gaye


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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2009, 04:04:00 PM »
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Wah wah..Ashutosh ji...
Kya lines likhi hai aapne..
Mazaa aagaya...
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2009, 04:17:10 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Aashutosh Ji.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Keep Going..

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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2009, 04:19:58 PM »
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Wah wah..Ashutosh ji...
Kya lines likhi hai aapne..
Mazaa aagaya...
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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2009, 04:22:57 PM »
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Shukriya janaab, super swan
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«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2009, 04:28:25 PM »
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Shukriya shally
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«Reply #6 on: July 02, 2009, 04:32:57 PM »
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i want some help from other members please
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«Reply #7 on: July 02, 2009, 07:05:26 PM »
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Ashutosh Ji,

Bohot Khoob
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«Reply #8 on: July 02, 2009, 07:06:09 PM »
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i want some help from other members please

Hello Ashutosh Ji,

What kind of help do you require ?

Shayara
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2009, 02:46:48 PM »
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i confused about reply coloum
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«Reply #10 on: July 03, 2009, 03:00:48 PM »
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Ashutosh Ji,

Please write in detail, what exactly is the problem or confusion so that we can help you.
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«Reply #11 on: July 03, 2009, 07:01:46 PM »
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Thanks shayara ji.
everything is clear, now.
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