AshqonKa Kaarvan Liye... {{ANGEL}}

by angel4u on April 04, 2009, 02:47:11 PM
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AshQon Ka Kaarvan Liye Hum Zindagi Ke Safar Pe Chalte Rahe,
Teri Yaadonki Khushbu Ke Liye Saansein Lete Rahe,

Teri Hi Baatein Teri Hi Yaadon Ka Ikhtiyaar Hai,
Apni Rooh Ki Aag Se Phir Bhi Tujhe Roshni Dete Rahe,

Tu Na Samajh Paaya Na Kabhi Bhi Hamari Wafako,
Khair Teri Bewafayike Sath Hum Wafa Karte Chale...
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«Reply #1 on: April 04, 2009, 02:57:10 PM »
Kaisi wafa aur kaisi bewafaiee
Yeh to samjhaya hota ke koi rishta tha

Muje ab gair ho jane ki q dete ho tohmat
Kabhi yeh to kaha hota ke GHAYEL apna tha
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«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2009, 05:46:31 PM »
Quote from: angel4u on April 04, 2009, 02:47:11 PM

AshQon Ka Kaarvan Liye Hum Zindagi Ke Safar Pe Chalte Rahe,
Teri Yaadonki Khushbu Ke Liye Saansein Lete Rahe,

Teri Hi Baatein Teri Hi Yaadon Ka Ikhtiyaar Hai,
Apni Rooh Ki Aag Se Phir Bhi Tujhe Roshni Dete Rahe,

Tu Na Samajh Paaya Na Kabhi Bhi Hamari Wafako,
Khair Teri Bewafayike Sath Hum Wafa Karte Chale...


Bohot Khoob Angel .. bohot ranjeeda si lines hain..good work  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2009, 06:14:13 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on April 04, 2009, 05:46:31 PM
Bohot Khoob Angel .. bohot ranjeeda si lines hain..good work  icon_thumleft

Bahut shukriya Talat Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: April 04, 2009, 06:36:51 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel!!  Applause Applause

Good One Sajid Bhai.. Applause
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«Reply #5 on: April 05, 2009, 05:29:21 AM »
Bahut shukriya Khwaish Ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2009, 07:02:18 AM »
Quote from: angel4u on April 04, 2009, 02:47:11 PM

AshQon Ka Kaarvan Liye Hum Zindagi Ke Safar Pe Chalte Rahe,
Teri Yaadonki Khushbu Ke Liye Saansein Lete Rahe,

Teri Hi Baatein Teri Hi Yaadon Ka Ikhtiyaar Hai,
Apni Rooh Ki Aag Se Phir Bhi Tujhe Roshni Dete Rahe,

Tu Na Samajh Paaya Na Kabhi Bhi Hamari Wafako,
Khair Teri Bewafayike Sath Hum Wafa Karte Chale...

Waah badi Sanjidgee se Badi Ranjidgee Ka Izhaar kiya Hai aapne
Angel ji..
waqaee dil k kareeb ho k Guzri aap ki Ye Lines.
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«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2009, 07:13:52 AM »
Shukriya Muhammed Ji...
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«Reply #8 on: April 13, 2009, 01:25:44 PM »
bahut gehri baat likhi hai aapne Angel ji Bahut khub[/] Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: April 13, 2009, 02:00:31 PM »
Bohat Achche Huzaina sis,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #10 on: April 13, 2009, 04:23:43 PM »
Thanks JJ and thanks Azeem Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2009, 07:37:37 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on April 04, 2009, 06:36:51 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel!!  Applause Applause

Good One Sajid Bhai.. Applause

Shukriyaan Khwaish.....waise sabse pehle maine hi is thread pe sher se reply diya aur Angel jee ne hame hi ignore kar diya. Kisi ke thread me sher likhna bhi main samajhta hu ke dad dene ka andaz hota hain, jo main ziyadatar karta bhi hu. Isse yeh sabit hota hain ke kisi ka kalam itna achcha tha ke aapka bhi dil hua ke aap kuch likhe.

Par shayed Angel jee ko hamara yeh andaz pasand nahi aaya, koi baat nahi agli baar koshish karege Bahut Khoob ya Nice lines hi kahe...

Waise tumne mere sher pe dad di yeh tumhara ehsan aur badappan hain.
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«Reply #12 on: April 14, 2009, 07:46:34 AM »
Humne yahan pe kahin bhi ignorance nahi dikhaya hai, haan ye baat hia ke aapne sirf apni shayri likhi is mere thread me, i can understand that it is with connection to my shayri, but nothing was mentioned in appreciation of my writing.

Please note that I had read it and not IGNORED it. As the appreciation was not mentioned i didnt do the same. AS SIMPLE AS IT IS!!!

one more thing it was not only me who had not commented on your writing.

If writing something without appreciating is a form of appreciation then let me say that, YOUR 'DAAD' WAS GOOD. EXTREMELY GOOD!!!

Hope you satisfied now...

Thanks...
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