kabhi kabhi

by abdulqadeer on November 25, 2008, 04:21:25 AM
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Kabhi kabhi ratoon me jagna acha lagta hai !!
Unki yaad ati hai to mauth ka samna lagta hai !!

Wo bhool gaye har wo bath jo ki thi hum se !!
Hame ajj bhi un baton ko sunna aur sunana  acha lagta hai !!

Na jane wo kahan chali gayi  chod ke mera shaher !!
Mahefilen ab bhi hazroon hai magaar ye shaher Virana lagta hai !!

Wo bewafa nahi thi doosto uski koi majbori hogi !!
Muskurati to ajj bhi hai wo magar chahera begana lagta hai !!

Jab se usne choda hai saath hamara kasam se doosto !!
Mera ghar mera shaher ye sub khuch qadeer maiqana lagta hai !!

Kahoon ke mai uski juda-e- ke alam me kya lagta hai !!
Uski beruqi jaise maiqana aur yaad paimana lagta hai  !!


Qadeertoopchi

From Dubai
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saloni bharani
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«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2008, 05:10:55 AM »
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acha likha ha aapna
                                      saloni
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2008, 05:32:19 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Qadir Ji
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zamal
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2008, 06:20:44 AM »
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very good Mr. Qadeet you are really a great poet.
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k.shael
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2008, 06:22:31 AM »
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NICE ONE  Applause,
ABD JI...
KEEP IT UP,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2008, 06:53:25 AM »
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likha kahan hai doosto maine to koshish ki hai !!
apne gamoon ko bhoolne ki fir eak nakaam koshish ki hai !!

aapne samjha mere dard ko tu kamm hone laga !!
uske chale jane ka qayal bhi  namm hone laga !!

na kahena meri shayari ko kabhi uski bewfa-E- !!
shayad mujh me  khuch kami thi ke meri wo hona apa-E-!!

thanks a lot for your replies and for the comments u gave to my ghazal

Qadeer Toopchi

from Dubai


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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2008, 06:55:04 AM »
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Nice work Qadeer ji
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