Kabr Puraanee hoo gayee........masoom

by Masoom Shahzada on August 30, 2012, 02:48:17 PM
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Meree ha.nsee khawab thee, karvat badal ke so ga'ee.
Dil ke kareeb aayee wo, jab door mujhse ho ga'ee.
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Halkaa saa haath fer kar, yaad saaf kar to dee.
Par aankhoo kee jindagee ga'ee, ek laash hee to ho ga'ee.
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Apne ja'ef kandhoo pe dootaa rahaa haseen kal.
Jiske naseeb me thee aaj, wo saath uske ho ga'ee.
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Chootee see ek muskaan pe, aansu shaheed so hu'ye.
Achchee bhalee rahee thee jo, aadat kharab ho ga'ee.
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Apnaa nahee rahaa koi, to dil se kah lete the sab.
Wo door kiyaa chaley gaye, DIL kee kamee bhee ho ga'ee.
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Wo dostee talak rahe, ham pyaar tak chaley gaye.
Usne khataa nahee kee, bas bhool hamse ho ga'ee.
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Laakhoo koshishey huyee, par meree aankhe band naa huyee.
Intizaar unkaa waisaa hee rahaa, bas kabr puraanee ho ga'ee.
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2012, 03:25:46 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Masoom bhaai...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2012, 03:31:00 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut Khoob Masoom bhai.
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2012, 04:02:28 PM »
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bahut khoob Masoom bhai..
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut umda ghazal
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2012, 05:55:29 PM »
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Meree hasee khawab thee, karvat badal ke so ga'ee.
Dil ke kareeb aayee wo, jab door mujhse ho ga'ee.
.
Halkaa saa haath fer kar, yaad saaf kar to dee.
Par aankhoo kee jindagee ga'ee, ek laash hee to ho ga'ee.
.
Apne za'ef kandhoo pe dootaa rahaa haseen kal.
Jiske naseeb me thee aaj, wo saath uske ho ga'ee.
.
Chootee see ek muskaan pe, aansu shaheed so hu'ye.
Achchee bhalee rahee thee jo, aadat kharab ho ga'ee. icon_scratch icon_scratch
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Apnaa nahee rahaa koi, to dil se kah lete the sab.
Wo door kiyaa chaley gaye, DIL kee kamee bhee ho ga'ee.
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Wo dostee talak rahe, ham pyaar tak chaley gaye.
Usne khataa nahee kee, bas bhool hamse ho ga'ee. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Laakhoo koshishey huyee, par meree aankhe band naa huyee.
Intizaar unkaa waisaa hee rahaa, bas kabr puraanee ho ga'ee. Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2012, 06:24:31 PM »
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Meree hasee khawab thee, karvat badal ke so ga'ee.
Dil ke kareeb aayee wo, jab door mujhse ho ga'ee.
.
Halkaa saa haath fer kar, yaad saaf kar to dee.
Par aankhoo kee jindagee ga'ee, ek laash hee to ho ga'ee.
.
Apne ja'ef kandhoo pe dootaa rahaa haseen kal.
Jiske naseeb me thee aaj, wo saath uske ho ga'ee.
.
Chootee see ek muskaan pe, aansu shaheed so hu'ye.
Achchee bhalee rahee thee jo, aadat kharab ho ga'ee.
.
Apnaa nahee rahaa koi, to dil se kah lete the sab.
Wo door kiyaa chaley gaye, DIL kee kamee bhee ho ga'ee.
.
Wo dostee talak rahe, ham pyaar tak chaley gaye.
Usne khataa nahee kee, bas bhool hamse ho ga'ee.
.
Laakhoo koshishey huyee, par meree aankhe band naa huyee.
Intizaar unkaa waisaa hee rahaa, bas kabr puraanee ho ga'ee.



bahut khoob masoom...........!
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2012, 06:44:57 PM »
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Masoom Sahaab Aadaab!


bahut khoob janab bade achche ashaar hai khoob gehrai hai...
achche khayaalat haiN... Usual Smile

AUr aapne apne khayaalaat ko bayaaN bhi kafi rawaaN andaaz
meiN kiya hai... is khoob aur umdaa koshish par hazaaroN
daad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

HaaN aik baat kaheNge... aapke likhane meiN natural rawani
hai.. so aap kalaam likhane ki tecniqs par thoda dhyaan deN
aap behad umdaa likheNge mujhe yakeen hai... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2012, 12:43:35 AM »
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bahut umda
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2012, 04:04:00 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: August 31, 2012, 02:34:19 PM »
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hats off to you masoom ji.. Usual Smile

bahut bahut umda.. har ek ashaar dil pe utarta gaya..

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«Reply #10 on: September 06, 2012, 02:37:46 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Masoom bhaai...!!!
Bahoot bahoot bahoot sukriyaa Kapil bhaai.
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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2012, 04:50:57 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut Khoob Masoom bhai.
Bahoot bahoot sukriyaa
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