Kam sey kam aaj phir muskuraaye to ho!

by abdbundeli on February 12, 2010, 07:23:56 PM
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Kam sey kam aaj phir muskuraaye to ho!
Ab tah-e-jaw sey kuchh paas aaye to ho!!

Ghat rahee hai wo dooree: yahee kam nahin;
Zad mein aakhir nigaahoun kee aaye to ho!!

Hai khizaan, baag mein zardiyaan hain rawaan:
Bululoun kaa tarannum bachaaye to ho!!

Gul naheen hain kaheen bhi: magar, shukra hai,
Geysuoun ko guloun sey sajaaye to ho!!

Phusphusaatee hai kuchh ab hawaa magribee:
Waadiyoun mein mahak sarsaraaye to ho!!

Hon, na hon, ab tumhaarey tasawwur mein ham:
Kuchh bhi ho, par, kaheen dil lagaaye to ho!

Deykhtaa huun pighaltaa-saa chashmoun mein kuchh!
Dil mein khwaaboun ki duniyaa basaaye to ho!!

Shab sitaaroun bharee, hai chhupaaye shfaq;
Pairahan mein bahaareyn chhupaaye to ho!!

Aa rahaa hai nikal kuchh laboun par, 'abd',
Beysadaa hi sahee, budbudaaye to ho!!

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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2010, 10:13:32 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2010, 04:01:39 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai Abd ji,very touching and mindblwing gazal.great creation.bahut pasand aayi mujhe.hats off.
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2010, 08:47:27 AM »
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Thanks a lot, Sheba ji!

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Wah kya baat hai Abd ji,very touching and mindblwing gazal.great creation.bahut pasand aayi mujhe.hats off.

Thanks a lot, Madhu ji!

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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2010, 11:22:33 AM »
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Thanks a lot, 'ehsaas SK ka' ji!

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Thanks, Rishi ji!

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Wow!!! Beautiful Abd ji

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Wow!!! Beautiful Abd ji

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Thanks a lot, khwaish ji!

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Thanks a lot, Rishi ji!

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«Reply #13 on: February 22, 2010, 08:00:14 PM »
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ACHHI GAZAL HAI ABDji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kam se kam aaj phir tum nazar aaye tou ho
Ruthe ho kab sey aaj mood mai aaye tou ho

Bole nahi mujhse par geet gun-gunaye tou ho
Meree kashish mai kheeche chale aaye tou ho


Kam sey kam aaj phir muskuraaye to ho!
Ab tah-e-jaw sey kuchh paas aaye to ho!!

Ghat rahee hai wo dooree: yahee kam nahin;
Zad mein aakhir nigaahoun kee aaye to ho!!

Hai khizaan, baag mein zardiyaan hain rawaan:
Bululoun kaa tarannum bachaaye to ho!!

Gul naheen hain kaheen bhi: magar, shukra hai,
Geysuoun ko guloun sey sajaaye to ho!!

Phusphusaatee hai kuchh ab hawaa magribee:
Waadiyoun mein mahak sarsaraaye to ho!!

Hon, na hon, ab tumhaarey tasawwur mein ham:
Kuchh bhi ho, par, kaheen dil lagaaye to ho!

Deykhtaa huun pighaltaa-saa chashmoun mein kuchh!
Dil mein khwaaboun ki duniyaa basaaye to ho!!

Shab sitaaroun bharee, hai chhupaaye shfaq;
Pairahan mein bahaareyn chhupaaye to ho!!

Aa rahaa hai nikal kuchh laboun par, 'abd',
Beysadaa hi sahee, budbudaaye to ho!!

                   - abd bundeli


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«Reply #14 on: February 23, 2010, 02:09:37 AM »
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Kam sey kam aaj phir muskuraaye to ho!
Ab tah-e-jaw sey kuchh paas aaye to ho!!

Ghat rahee hai wo dooree: yahee kam nahin;
Zad mein aakhir nigaahoun kee aaye to ho!!

Hai khizaan, baag mein zardiyaan hain rawaan:
Bululoun kaa tarannum bachaaye to ho!!

Gul naheen hain kaheen bhi: magar, shukra hai,
Geysuoun ko guloun sey sajaaye to ho!!

Phusphusaatee hai kuchh ab hawaa magribee:
Waadiyoun mein mahak sarsaraaye to ho!!

Hon, na hon, ab tumhaarey tasawwur mein ham:
Kuchh bhi ho, par, kaheen dil lagaaye to ho!

Deykhtaa huun pighaltaa-saa chashmoun mein kuchh!
Dil mein khwaaboun ki duniyaa basaaye to ho!!

Shab sitaaroun bharee, hai chhupaaye shfaq;
Pairahan mein bahaareyn chhupaaye to ho!!

Aa rahaa hai nikal kuchh laboun par, 'abd',
Beysadaa hi sahee, budbudaaye to ho!!

                   - abd bundeli




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