Muskuraaye, baahuoun mein aa gaye!

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Peishtar to dulhin-sey sharmaa gaye!
Jhilmilaaye jugnuoun-sey, chhaa gaye!

Lagaa jaisey puraanee pahichaan thee;
Muskuraaye, baahuoun mein aa gaye!!

Hijra mein kab din huaa, kab shab huyee?
Jaan paaye na ham; woh tarsaa gaye!!

Zindagee thee, intizaar-e-yaar thaa;
Dour-e-mahshar deykh kar ghabraa gaye!

Ab kareyn ham kyaa, 'abd' kuchh to kaho?
Na jaaney kyoun abra hamain sataa gaye?

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«Reply #1 on: December 04, 2008, 04:33:51 PM »
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AS USUAL GREAT SHAYARI ABD SAHAB Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: December 04, 2008, 04:35:38 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 04, 2008, 05:09:54 PM »
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AS USUAL GREAT SHAYARI ABD SAHAB Clapping Smiley
Thanks a lot for your kind comments diya786 ji!
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«Reply #4 on: December 04, 2008, 05:12:47 PM »
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Wah ! Kya baat hai ! Applause Applause Applause
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah Rajbir ji! Nazr-e-inaayat banaaye rakhiyegaa!
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«Reply #5 on: December 05, 2008, 04:36:33 AM »
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Peishtar to dulhin-sey sharmaa gaye!
Jhilmilaaye jugnuoun-sey, chhaa gaye!

Lagaa jaisey puraanee pahichaan thee;
Muskuraaye, baahuoun mein aa gaye!!

Hijra mein kab din huaa, kab shab huyee?
Jaan paaye na ham; woh tarsaa gaye!!

Zindagee thee, intizaar-e-yaar thaa;
Dour-e-mahshar deykh kar ghabraa gaye!

Ab kareyn ham kyaa, 'abd' kuchh to kaho?
Na jaaney kyoun abra hamain sataa gaye?

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Very nice shayari, Abd Ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 05, 2008, 05:31:58 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai ABD JI
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«Reply #7 on: December 05, 2008, 09:40:54 AM »
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Very nice shayari, Abd Ji
Bahut khoob likha hai ABD JI

Haardik dhanyawaad!
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«Reply #8 on: December 10, 2008, 03:39:58 AM »
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wah kay abaat hai Abd ji, bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #9 on: December 10, 2008, 09:16:50 AM »
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wah kay abaat hai Abd ji, bahoot khoob!!
Pooja ji! Thanks! I'm happy you liked it!
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2010, 02:56:42 PM »
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Peishtar to dulhin-sey sharmaa gaye!
Jhilmilaaye jugnuoun-sey, chhaa gaye!

Lagaa jaisey puraanee pahichaan thee;
Muskuraaye, baahuoun mein aa gaye!!

Hijra mein kab din huaa, kab shab huyee?
Jaan paaye na ham; woh tarsaa gaye!!

Zindagee thee, intizaar-e-yaar thaa;
Dour-e-mahshar deykh kar ghabraa gaye!

Ab kareyn ham kyaa, 'abd' kuchh to kaho?
Na jaaney kyoun abra hamain sataa gaye?

                        - abd bundeli


Alfaaz achchhe haiN.
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2010, 05:37:00 PM »
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Alfaaz achchhe haiN.

Shukriyah, waquif ansari ji!

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«Reply #12 on: February 22, 2010, 08:23:59 AM »
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Peishtar to dulhin-sey sharmaa gaye!
Jhilmilaaye jugnuoun-sey, chhaa gaye!

Lagaa jaisey puraanee pahichaan thee;
Muskuraaye, baahuoun mein aa gaye!!

Hijra mein kab din huaa, kab shab huyee?
Jaan paaye na ham; woh tarsaa gaye!!

Zindagee thee, intizaar-e-yaar thaa;
Dour-e-mahshar deykh kar ghabraa gaye!

Ab kareyn ham kyaa, 'abd' kuchh to kaho?
Na jaaney kyoun abra hamain sataa gaye?

                        - abd bundeli

Wah bahut khoob  Applause
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«Reply #13 on: February 22, 2010, 11:59:27 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob  Applause

Thanks a lot, 'malli' ji!

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«Reply #14 on: February 22, 2010, 12:15:57 PM »
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Lagaa jaisey puraanee pahichaan thee;
Muskuraaye, baahuoun mein aa gaye!!

Hijra mein kab din huaa, kab shab huyee?
Jaan paaye na ham; woh tarsaa gaye!!


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