Karz wafa ka.........................................Aqsh

by aqsh on February 05, 2013, 05:24:07 AM
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Karz apni wafa ka, chukaana padha
Dard mein bhi hame, muskuraana padha
 
Ho na jaaye kaheeN, pyaar badnaam ye
Is liye zakhm dil kaa, chupaana padha

Har ghadi yaad unki, sataaye mujhe
Haal dil kaa labon se, batana padha

Raat bhar ashk, behte rahe yaad mein
Zindagi ko hame, yun bitaana padha

Sang dil hai sanam, thee hame ye khabar.
“Aqsh” ko saath fir bhee, nibhana padha.


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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2013, 05:32:34 AM »
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waah khub likh ja raha hai acha acha good keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2013, 05:35:54 AM »
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Bahut achhi ghazal hai aqsh. Pukhta taur se Bahr mein kahi is khubsurat ghazal ke liye dheron daad.
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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2013, 05:37:46 AM »
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Karz apni wafa ka, chukaana padaa
Dard mein bhi hame, muskuraana padaa
 
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Ho na jaaye kaheeN, pyaar badnaam ye
Is liye zakhm dil kaa, chupaana padaa

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Har ghadi yaad unki, sataaye mujhe
Haal dil kaa labon se, batana padaa
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Raat bhar ashk, behte rahe yaad mein
Zindagi ko hame, yun bitaana padha
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Sang dil hai sanam, thee hame ye khabar.
“Aqsh” ko saath fir bhee, nibhana padha.


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waah kya khoob lika hai Aqsh ji ,,,
lajawaab ,umdaaa...ek RAU to banta hai...
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2013, 05:45:01 AM »
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Bahut badhiya...
Mohar lag chuki hai is ghazal par hasan sir ki..
bahut mubarakbaad
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2013, 05:51:31 AM »
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waah khub likh ja raha hai acha acha good keep it up
thnx sahill jee.
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2013, 05:53:14 AM »
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Bahut achhi ghazal hai aqsh. Pukhta taur se Bahr mein kahi is khubsurat ghazal ke liye dheron daad.
housla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya hasan jee. aage bhi aise hi saath banaye rakhiyega. jazakallah
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2013, 05:53:55 AM »
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waah kya khoob lika hai Aqsh ji ,,,
lajawaab ,umdaaa...ek RAU to banta hai...
thank you sooooooooooo much sahal and thnx for the rau also
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2013, 05:54:19 AM »
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Karz apni wafa ka, chukaana padaa
Dard mein bhi hame, muskuraana padaa
 
Ho na jaaye kaheeN, pyaar badnaam ye
Is liye zakhm dil kaa, chupaana padaa

Har ghadi yaad unki, sataaye mujhe
Haal dil kaa labon se, batana padaa

Raat bhar ashk, behte rahe yaad mein
Zindagi ko hame, yun bitaana padha

Sang dil hai sanam, thee hame ye khabar.
“Aqsh” ko saath fir bhee, nibhana padha.






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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2013, 05:55:25 AM »
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Bahut badhiya...
Mohar lag chuki hai is ghazal par hasan sir ki..
bahut mubarakbaad
Thank you mukesh jee. jee hasan ji ke comment ke liye hi wait kar rahi thi
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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2013, 05:56:25 AM »
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Thank you sooooooo much qalb jee.
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2013, 06:08:03 AM »
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Bohat Khub!!! Ek behtareen dard bhari ghazal. Daad kabool kijiye!!!

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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2013, 06:12:40 AM »
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Bohat Khub!!! Ek behtareen dard bhari ghazal. Daad kabool kijiye!!!

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thank you shireen jee soooooooo much.
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«Reply #13 on: February 05, 2013, 06:17:52 AM »
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बहुत खूब अक्ष जी.. यु ही लिखते रहे और खुश रहे..
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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2013, 06:21:59 AM »
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बहुत खूब अक्ष जी.. यु ही लिखते रहे और खुश रहे..

thank you rishi jee sooooo much.
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