~.. khaab ki tabeer hone se rahi

by janumanu on November 15, 2010, 07:37:34 AM
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Salaam namstey
choti si ghazal nazr kar raha hun, chahe jaisa salook kareN
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खाब की ताबीर होने से रही
ऐसी भी तकदीर होने से रही

पहले सी झुकती नहीं तेरी नज़र
अब कमां ये तीर होने से रही

चाहे जितने रंग भर लो खाब के
पानी मे तस्वीर होने से रही

कर लो पैनी ' फ़िक्र' जितनी तुम कलम
जौक, ग़ालिब, मीर, होने से रही 

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khaab ki tabeer hone se rahi
aisi bhi taqdeer hone se rahi

pahle si jhukti nahi teri nazar
ab kamaaN ye teer hone se rahi

chache jitne rang bhar lo khbaab ke
paani mai tasveer hone se rahi

kar lo paini ' fikr' jitni tum qalam
Zouk, Ghalib, Meer, hone se rahi
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«Reply #1 on: November 15, 2010, 07:42:09 AM »
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badhiya he bahut badhiya he jaanumanu ji...

likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #2 on: November 15, 2010, 10:28:14 AM »
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bahut achha laga aapko padh kar !

na kar gham ki tu abhi kaheen nahin is mukaam par
ek kadam to badha hausla karke...
             ek naya mukaam khud tere kadmo mein hoga... !

Intezar
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«Reply #3 on: November 16, 2010, 11:02:08 AM »
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    Bahut achha likha hai aapne,maza aaya padh kar. hello2 hello2
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«Reply #4 on: November 20, 2010, 07:32:17 AM »
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badhiya he bahut badhiya he jaanumanu ji...

likhte rahiye~

shukriyaa ji .............
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«Reply #5 on: November 20, 2010, 07:32:51 AM »
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    Bahut achha likha hai aapne,maza aaya padh kar. hello2 hello2

thank u intzaar shahab Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: November 20, 2010, 07:33:12 AM »
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shukriyaa ji .............
thankx tamanna ji
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