khamoshi..sheba

by Sheba on July 13, 2010, 08:19:57 PM
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                    jaaun kahan ki ab nazaare kahin nahin..!
                    bataaun kise ki ab hamaare kahin nahin..!

                   jaante the sabhi mujhe oss qahar se pahle..!
                   jalaaun kaise ki ab sharaare kahin nahin..!

                   bezuban kar diya hausla mera kuch iss tarah..!
                   sambhalun kaise ki ab sahaare kahin nahin..!

                   tabaah ho gaya shaher uss toofan ke baad..!
                   roshan karun kaise ki ab ujiyare kahin nahin..!

                   sadaa teri nahin sunta yahan koi aaj sheba..!
                   rokun zulm kaise ki ab daayre kahin nahin..!
                 
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«Reply #1 on: July 14, 2010, 07:13:00 AM »
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bahut khoob Sheba ji...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2010, 05:54:42 PM »
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bahot khoob mohtarama sheba saheba ....bahot khoob..matlaa bahoot qareeb raha..bahot achhe
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2010, 06:20:43 PM »
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Sheba bahan adaab. Be-shak ye apki ek achi taqhleeq hai lekin ise ghazal nahi kaha ja sakta. Apse mo'dbaana arz hai ke ghazal section me sirf ghazal hi post kiya karen. Ghazal ke kuch rules hote hai aur unko amal me laana zaroory hota hai. Umeed hai meri bat ka aap bura nahi  manengi aur samajhney ki koshish karengi. Shukriya.
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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2010, 11:29:49 PM »
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                    jaaun kahan ki ab nazaare kahin nahin..!
                    bataaun kise ki ab hamaare kahin nahin..!

                   jaante the sabhi mujhe oss qahar se pahle..!
                   jalaaun kaise ki ab sharaare kahin nahin..!

                   bezuban kar diya hausla mera kuch iss tarah..!
                   sambhalun kaise ki ab sahaare kahin nahin..!

                   tabaah ho gaya shaher uss toofan ke baad..!
                   roshan karun kaise ki ab ujiyare kahin nahin..!

                   sadaa teri nahin sunta yahan koi aaj sheba..!
                   rokun zulm kaise ki ab daayre kahin nahin..!
                 

Bahut Umdaa Khayal.....very impressive poetry ... Sheba Ji ! nice creation...dil se daad ... !
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2010, 05:22:52 AM »
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   Bahut khoobsurat likha hai Sheeba sister, Daad kabool farmaayein.
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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2010, 10:04:27 PM »
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achay ehsaasoN par daad hazir hai qubool keejiye


aslam
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«Reply #7 on: July 21, 2010, 08:05:45 PM »
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bahut khoob Sheba ji...!!!

thank u klaskar ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 21, 2010, 08:06:46 PM »
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bahot khoob mohtarama sheba saheba ....bahot khoob..matlaa bahoot qareeb raha..bahot achhe

shukria nazar sahab
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«Reply #9 on: July 21, 2010, 08:07:22 PM »
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Sheba bahan adaab. Be-shak ye apki ek achi taqhleeq hai lekin ise ghazal nahi kaha ja sakta. Apse mo'dbaana arz hai ke ghazal section me sirf ghazal hi post kiya karen. Ghazal ke kuch rules hote hai aur unko amal me laana zaroory hota hai. Umeed hai meri bat ka aap bura nahi  manengi aur samajhney ki koshish karengi. Shukriya.


thanks
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«Reply #10 on: July 26, 2010, 01:10:00 PM »
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Bahut Umdaa Khayal.....very impressive poetry ... Sheba Ji ! nice creation...dil se daad ... !

thank you anshu ji
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«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2010, 09:10:15 AM »
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   Bahut khoobsurat likha hai Sheeba sister, Daad kabool farmaayein.

thank u tamanna ji
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«Reply #12 on: August 05, 2010, 09:18:41 AM »
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hmm...kya bat he ji ...

mere dil ko bhati thi tumhare sath beeti shaame,
kise batau ki wo mausam ab nigebaan nahi~
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«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2010, 08:41:23 AM »
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achay ehsaasoN par daad hazir hai qubool keejiye


aslam

thank you aslam sahab
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