KHOON - E - JIGAR SE LIKKHA WOH KHAT .............HASAN

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Aise   meri    wafaaoN    ka     us   nay    sila   diya ,
Khoon - e - jigar  se  likkha  woh khat  bhee  jala  diya


Soya    hua    Naseeb    Khuda    nay    jaga    diya,
Roothhe   mere   Habeeb   ko   phir   say    mila   diya


Fikr -e- jahaaN  rahee ,  na  hi  yaad -e- khuda  hameiN ,
Hum   ko   tumhare   pyaar   ne    paagal    bana   diya


DekhooN  na  tere  khwaab , ye  ta'ana  na  day  mujhe ,
MaiN ne  tera  khayaal  hi  kab   ka  sula  diya


Aawaaz - e - karb   aisi  thhi   muflis  ki   Aah  meiN ,
Ghamm  jis  ne  hum  ko   saara ,  hamaara  bhula diya

 
Is  shouq - e - shairy  ka ,  maiN   mamnoon  hooN  bahut ,
Jis  nay   baghair - e - yaar  bhi  jeena   sikha  diya


Gunjaish - e - darogh  ,  na   hargiz ,  'Hasan  'rahee ,
Jab   Aaine   ne    chehra    hamaara     dikha   diya
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«Reply #1 on: December 24, 2012, 12:33:42 PM »
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Aise   meri    wafaaoN    ka     us   nay    sila   diya ,
Khoon - e - jigar  se  likkha  woh khat  bhee  jala  diya


Soya    hua    Naseeb    Khuda    nay    jaga    diya,
Roothhe   mere   Habeeb   ko   phir   say    mila   diya


Fikr -e- jahaaN  rahee ,  na  hi  yaad -e- khuda  hameiN ,
Hum   ko   tumhare   pyaar   ne    paagal    bana   diya


DekhooN  na  tere  khwaab , ye  ta'ana  na  day  mujhe ,
MaiN ne  tera  khayaal  hi  kab   ka  sula  diya


Aawaaz - e - karb   aisi  thhi   muflis  ki   Aah  meiN ,
Ghamm  jis  ne  hum  ko   saara ,  hamaara  bhula diya

 
Aye  shouq - e - shairy  ,  maiN   mamnoon  hooN  tera ,
Tuu  nay   baghair - e - yaar  bhi  jeena   sikha  diya


Gunjaish - e - darogh  ,  na   hargiz ,  'Hasan  'rahee ,
Jab   Aaine   ne    chehra    hamaara     dikha   diya




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«Reply #2 on: December 24, 2012, 12:35:18 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 24, 2012, 12:39:12 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 24, 2012, 12:48:28 PM »
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Wah bahot khubsoorat ghazal kahi hai Hasan Sahab. No doubt aap bahot achha lihte hai. Is misre par ek baar nazr-e-saani kar lein shayad isme koi typing mistake hui ho.
Aye  shouq - e - shairy  ,  maiN   mamnoon  hooN  tera ,
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«Reply #5 on: December 24, 2012, 01:08:23 PM »
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Aise   meri    wafaaoN    ka     us   nay    sila   diya ,
Khoon - e - jigar  se  likkha  woh khat  bhee  jala  diya


Soya    hua    Naseeb    Khuda    nay    jaga    diya,
Roothhe   mere   Habeeb   ko   phir   say    mila   diya


Fikr -e- jahaaN  rahee ,  na  hi  yaad -e- khuda  hameiN ,
Hum   ko   tumhare   pyaar   ne    paagal    bana   diya


DekhooN  na  tere  khwaab , ye  ta'ana  na  day  mujhe ,
MaiN ne  tera  khayaal  hi  kab   ka  sula  diya


Aawaaz - e - karb   aisi  thhi   muflis  ki   Aah  meiN ,
Ghamm  jis  ne  hum  ko   saara ,  hamaara  bhula diya

 
Is  shouq - e - shairy  ka ,  maiN   mamnoon  hooN  bahut ,
Jis  nay   baghair - e - yaar  bhi  jeena   sikha  diya


Gunjaish - e - darogh  ,  na   hargiz ,  'Hasan  'rahee ,
Jab   Aaine   ne    chehra    hamaara     dikha   diya

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«Reply #6 on: December 24, 2012, 01:14:48 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: December 24, 2012, 02:27:00 PM »
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Okay sir, kabhi kabhi aisa ho jaata hai. Khush rahiye.
Wah bahot khubsoorat ghazal kahi hai Hasan Sahab. No doubt aap bahot achha lihte hai. Is misre par ek baar nazr-e-saani kar lein shayad isme koi typing mistake hui ho.
Aye  shouq - e - shairy  ,  maiN   mamnoon  hooN  tera ,
Bahut shukriya, Riyaaz saheb . Aap durust hain , yaqeenan yeh sher ghalat likh gaya thha; lekin main ne post karte hi ghalti mahsoos karli thhi aur fouran uski maoujooda shakl mein tarmeem kardee thhi.Us waqt tak sirf qalb saheb ka reply aaya thha jinhon ne ghazal quote bhi ki hai. Aapne ghaliban un ki post per ghazal parhi hai.Baharhaal moujuda shakl durust hai.Aapka error point out karne ke liye mamnoon hoon.Khush rahye.Hasan

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«Reply #8 on: December 24, 2012, 02:29:20 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: December 24, 2012, 02:41:36 PM »
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Fikr -e- jahaaN  rahee ,  na  hi  yaad -e- khuda  hameiN ,
Hum   ko   tumhare   pyaar   ne    paagal    bana   diya

Is  shouq - e - shairy  ka ,  maiN   mamnoon  hooN  bahut ,
Jis  nay   baghair - e - yaar  bhi  jeena   sikha  diya Applause Applause

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«Reply #10 on: December 24, 2012, 02:47:30 PM »
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Okay sir. Kabhi kabhi aisa ho jaata hai.Khush rahiye.
Bahut shukriya, Riyaaz saheb . Aap durust hain , yaqeenan yeh sher ghalat likh gaya thha; lekin main ne post karte hi ghalti mahsoos karli thhi aur fouran uski maoujooda shakl mein tarmeem kardee thhi.Us waqt tak sirf qalb saheb ka reply aaya thha jinhon ne ghazal quote bhi ki hai. Aapne ghaliban un ki post per ghazal parhi hai.Baharhaal moujuda shakl durust hai.Aapka error point out karne ke liye mamnoon hoon.Khush rahye.Hasan


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«Reply #11 on: December 24, 2012, 03:05:45 PM »
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Aise   meri    wafaaoN    ka     us   nay    sila   diya ,
Khoon - e - jigar  se  likkha  woh khat  bhee  jala  diya


Soya    hua    Naseeb    Khuda    nay    jaga    diya,
Roothhe   mere   Habeeb   ko   phir   say    mila   diya


Fikr -e- jahaaN  rahee ,  na  hi  yaad -e- khuda  hameiN ,
Hum   ko   tumhare   pyaar   ne    paagal    bana   diya


DekhooN  na  tere  khwaab , ye  ta'ana  na  day  mujhe ,
MaiN ne  tera  khayaal  hi  kab   ka  sula  diya


Aawaaz - e - karb   aisi  thhi   muflis  ki   Aah  meiN ,
Ghamm  jis  ne  hum  ko   saara ,  hamaara  bhula diya

 
Is  shouq - e - shairy  ka ,  maiN   mamnoon  hooN  bahut ,
Jis  nay   baghair - e - yaar  bhi  jeena   sikha  diya


Gunjaish - e - darogh  ,  na   hargiz ,  'Hasan  'rahee ,
Jab   Aaine   ne    chehra    hamaara     dikha   diya



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