Khoon mazloom ka her daur me baha kyon hai

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on December 24, 2012, 06:27:13 PM
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Tumhare ghar me, yeh shoor sa macha kyon hai
koi taqreeb nahi hay, to ghar saja kyon hai.

marne wale ka jab, koi bhi nahi tha waris
lahad pa uski yeh chiragh, eyk jala kyon hai

aaloda dahar ki fiza na ho, iska hay jawab
woh samunder,kahi'n dasht,yeh sahra kyon hai

fasley barh gaye itne, ki simatna hay mohaal
bichar ke mujhse, bahut dour woh gaya kyon hai

anjaam hay wahi marna, yeh janta hay bashar
maut ke khauf se, ta umr yeh dara kyon hay

khilaaf e zulm sadayein huein buland magar
khoon mazloom ka her daur me baha kyon hai

hay yaqee'n jab, ki nahi koi aane wala hay
ho gayi raat, ab darwaza yeh khula kyon hai

kashish zameen ki, tahqeeq ka sabab yeh bana
peyr se phal, su e zameen hi gira kyon hai
 
              .........S.M.Mahzar
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«Reply #1 on: December 24, 2012, 06:37:39 PM »
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Tumhare ghar me, yeh shoor sa macha kyon hai
koi taqreeb nahi hay, to ghar saja kyon hai.

marne wale ka jab, koi bhi nahi tha waris
lahad pa uski yeh chiragh, eyk jala kyon hai

aaloda dahar ki fiza na ho, iska hay jawab
woh samunder,kahi'n dasht,yeh sahra kyon hai

fasley barh gaye itne, ki simatna hay mohaal
bichar ke mujhse, bahut dour woh gaya kyon hai

anjaam hay wahi marna, yeh janta hay bashar
maut ke khauf se, ta umr yeh dara kyon hay

khilaaf e zulm sadayein huein buland magar
khoon mazloom ka her daur me baha kyon hai

hay yaqee'n jab, ki nahi koi aane wala hay
ho gayi raat, ab darwaza yeh khula kyon hai

kashish zameen ki, tahqeeq ka sabab yeh bana
peyr se phal, su e zameen hi gira kyon hai
 
              .........S.M.Mahzar


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«Reply #2 on: December 24, 2012, 06:54:55 PM »
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Mazhar Sahaab Aadaab!



Bahut khoob janab badi hi achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Behad khoob ashaar rahe... aur khoobusrat adaygi rahi..

Is umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
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Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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«Reply #3 on: December 24, 2012, 07:01:19 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 24, 2012, 07:12:19 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: December 24, 2012, 08:18:51 PM »
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Tumhare ghar me, yeh shoor sa macha kyon hai
koi taqreeb nahi hay, to ghar saja kyon hai.

marne wale ka jab, koi bhi nahi tha waris
lahad pa uski yeh chiragh, eyk jala kyon hai

hay yaqee'n jab, ki nahi koi aane wala hay
ho gayi raat, ab darwaza yeh khula kyon hai

ye ashaar behad bhaaye mujhe..

poori ghazal par purzor daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kareN

likhte rahiye

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«Reply #6 on: December 24, 2012, 08:42:38 PM »
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Bahut khoob , Mazhar saheb . Bahut bahut mubarak ho.
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«Reply #7 on: December 24, 2012, 08:47:45 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: December 25, 2012, 06:16:47 AM »
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wah wah wah wah kya umda ghazal kahi hai mahzar saheb, jitni taareef ki jaye kam hai; sabhi ashaar lajwab rahe, aur matalaa to kamaal raha mubarakbaaad qubool kareN
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«Reply #9 on: December 25, 2012, 12:10:43 PM »
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Many many Thanks.................
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«Reply #10 on: December 25, 2012, 12:14:08 PM »
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Mazhar Sahaab Aadaab!



Bahut khoob janab badi hi achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Behad khoob ashaar rahe... aur khoobusrat adaygi rahi..

Is umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Parwaz saheb,
        Aapka shukrguzar oon ki aapko kalaam pasand aaya, hausla afzai ka mamnoon hoon.
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«Reply #11 on: December 25, 2012, 12:16:40 PM »
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wah wah wah wah kya umda ghazal kahi hai mahzar saheb, jitni taareef ki jaye kam hai; sabhi ashaar lajwab rahe, aur matalaa to kamaal raha mubarakbaaad qubool kareN
Aarish saheb,
 kalam itna achaa nahi tha jitni aapne tareef ki, hausla afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #12 on: December 25, 2012, 12:18:16 PM »
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nice creation
many thanks......
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«Reply #13 on: December 25, 2012, 12:19:55 PM »
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very nice
aqsh saheb, shukriya......................
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«Reply #14 on: December 25, 2012, 12:22:15 PM »
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Bahut khoob , Mazhar saheb . Bahut bahut mubarak ho.
F.H.Siddiqi saheb, tareef aur mubarakbad ka shukrguzar hoon.
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