Aaj ke is daur mein aye dost yeh manzar kyon hai!

by Deepati on December 05, 2008, 04:45:39 AM
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Aaj ke is daur mein aye dost yeh manzar kyon hai,
zakham har sar pe har ik haath mein pathar kyon hai.

Jab haqeeqat hai ke har zarre mein tu rahta hai,
phir zameen par kahin masjid kahin mandir kyon hai.

Apna anjaam tou maloom hai sabko phir bhi,
apni nazron mein har insaan sikandar kyon hai.

Zindagi jeene ke kaabil hii nahin ab "fakir"
varna har aankh mein ashqon ka samandar kyon hai.


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«Reply #1 on: December 05, 2008, 05:32:45 AM »
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Nice Sharing Deepati Ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 05, 2008, 11:03:08 AM »
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Aaj ke is daur mein aye dost yeh manzar kyon hai,
zakham har sar pe har ik haath mein pathar kyon hai.

Jab haqeeqat hai ke har zarre mein tu rahta hai,
phir zameen par kahin masjid kahin mandir kyon hai.

Apna anjaam tou maloom hai sabko phir bhi,
apni nazron mein har insaan sikandar kyon hai.

Zindagi jeene ke kaabil hii nahin ab,
varna har aankh mein ashqon ka samandar kyon hai.

"Sudarshan Fakir"
Nice sharing Deepati ji!
Aakhiree sheir ki pahlee laain pooree enter naheen ho paayee hai! Wah shaayad yoon hai:
Zindagi jeene ke kaabil hii nahin ab, ae Fakir,
Please look into it!
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«Reply #3 on: December 05, 2008, 11:28:43 AM »
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Nice Sharing Deepati Ji

Thanks Rajesh Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 05, 2008, 11:39:05 AM »
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Nice sharing Deepati ji!
Aakhiree sheir ki pahlee laain pooree enter naheen ho paayee hai! Wah shaayad yoon hai:
Zindagi jeene ke kaabil hii nahin ab, ae Fakir,
Please look into it!
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«Reply #5 on: December 05, 2008, 02:14:56 PM »
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nice bahut acha likha ha aapna
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«Reply #6 on: December 25, 2012, 10:19:20 PM »
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Aaj ke is daur mein aye dost yeh manzar kyon hai,
zakham har sar pe har ik haath mein pathar kyon hai.

Jab haqeeqat hai ke har zarre mein tu rahta hai,
phir zameen par kahin masjid kahin mandir kyon hai.

Apna anjaam tou maloom hai sabko phir bhi,
apni nazron mein har insaan sikandar kyon hai.

Zindagi jeene ke kaabil hii nahin ab "fakir"
varna har aankh mein ashqon ka samandar kyon hai.


"Sudarshan Fakir"

Deepati ji, as the posted ghazal was related to ghazal, i have posted,so viewed id .really a nice sharing by you.
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