Koi deta hai dastak...:Ghazals

daljeet_faqeer

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Koi deta hai dastak dil ke darwaze par,
Kholkar dekhta hoon to uska nishaan nahin milta.

Maine laakh doondha usko har gali chaurahe par,
Is bewafa duniya mein uska aashiyaan nahin milta.

Koi to batlaye ye mod kidhar jaata hai,
Is dagar pe mujhe kyun koi carawan nahin milta.

Mehboob mil jaaye to suqoon hoga dil ko,
Ab to is dil se bhi ye jahaan nahin milta.

Yu to kai zakhm khaye hain dil e nadaan ne,
Humein ae khuda aap sa meherbaan nahin milta.

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Talat

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Re: Koi deta hai dastak...

«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2009, 11:19:38 AM »

Bohot Khoob Daljeet Ji


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diya786

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Re: Koi deta hai dastak...

«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2009, 11:21:00 AM »

Realy nice Dajeet ji Applause


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Muhammed

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Re: Koi deta hai dastak...

«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2009, 11:40:58 AM »

Quote from: daljeet_faqeer on April 07, 2009, 11:03:46 AM

Daljeet Faqeer Saab aapki 46 Post Mein..Ik bhi Nazm Aisi Nahi Jisko Maine Na Padha Ho..Haan Do Chaar Nazar andaaz Ho Gayi hongi...Waqaee aap 100% shayar Ho..Bahot hi Kam Likhte Ho par Badhiya Likhte Ho Saab..


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Koi deta hai dastak...

«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2009, 12:20:29 PM »

Bohat khoob Daljeet and i agree with what Muhammad said...


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dead heart

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Re: Koi deta hai dastak...

«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2009, 08:57:13 PM »

Bahaut khoob Daljeet jee...


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Pooja

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Re: Koi deta hai dastak...

«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2009, 09:06:07 PM »

wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob daljeet ji!!


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Koi deta hai dastak...

«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2009, 05:15:28 AM »

Nice one Daljeet Ji


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Azeem 4 Ghazals

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Re: Koi deta hai dastak...

«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2009, 02:44:02 PM »

Bohat Achche Daljeet Ji, Sirf Ghazal Ke Liye Maine Ye ID banaai hai,.

Bohat Achcha LOikha Hai Aapne,.


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