Kyn uthaye firta hai bar-e-ashiqi--- Kumaar

by kumaar on December 07, 2014, 03:19:51 PM
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Dekhna hai wo mujh par meharbaan kitna hai,
Asliyat hai kitni aur chhupa gumaan kitna hai!!

Kitnaa degi saath ye zameen mera is rah-e-zindagi mei,
Dekhna hai mere sar par ab bhi aasmaan kitna hai!!

Roj banti hai fir fanaa ho jaati hai hazaroN khawahisheiN,
Hai ghar rahne ko yaqeenan par na khabar usme makaan kitna hai!!

Naa aana kabhi ru-b-ru ki fir se udaas nhi hona meri rooh ko,
Dekhna hai bhool ke tujhko dil ab shaadamaan* kitana hai!!

Kyn ab tak uthaaye firta hai baar-e-ashiqi 'Kumaar',
Ki kaise samjauN dil ab bhi nasamaj - naadaan kitna hai!!!

Jai Kumaar


Shaadamaan---- Happy khush

Baar-e-ashiqi--- Ashiqi ka bhoj
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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2014, 09:36:14 PM »
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waah waaah waah khoobsoorat
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«Reply #2 on: December 07, 2014, 10:23:57 PM »
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thnx sir ji
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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2014, 02:03:20 AM »
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Kumaar jee Aadaab ... !

Waah waah waah kia kahne janab behad pur asar aur pur lutf kalaam kahi hai ...
Sabhi sher qabil e daad hai ...

Behad khoob janab... is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye bazm ko roshan O aabaad karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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«Reply #4 on: December 08, 2014, 05:10:14 AM »
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Nihaayat khoobsurat Kumar Sahib ,dheron daad.
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«Reply #5 on: December 08, 2014, 12:47:51 PM »
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Bahut achchhe sher hain...mere sir pe aasmaan Kita hai.....wah Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 08, 2014, 03:36:58 PM »
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Excellent creation Mr. Kumaar as Mr. Deepraghav described I would repeat his words that aasaman sir pe is the best line of your this ghazal.

I would also like to repeat Mr. ParwaaZ's words that Sabhi sher qabil e daad hai ...

My like Rau is for you.

Keep writing.
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«Reply #7 on: December 08, 2014, 05:57:04 PM »
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Behad khoobsurat andaaz me alfaazon ko piroya hai aapne... dheron daad...
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«Reply #8 on: December 08, 2014, 06:19:55 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: December 08, 2014, 07:32:29 PM »
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thanks a lot parwaaZ ji
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«Reply #11 on: December 08, 2014, 07:36:09 PM »
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Nihaayat khoobsurat Kumar Sahib ,dheron daad.
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shukriya sirji
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Bahut achchhe sher hain...mere sir pe aasmaan Kita hai.....wah Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: December 08, 2014, 07:37:50 PM »
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Bahut achchhe sher hain...mere sir pe aasmaan Kita hai.....wah Applause Applause

thnaks brother..
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«Reply #14 on: December 08, 2014, 07:39:44 PM »
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Excellent creation Mr. Kumaar as Mr. Deepraghav described I would repeat his words that aasaman sir pe is the best line of your this ghazal.

I would also like to repeat Mr. ParwaaZ's words that Sabhi sher qabil e daad hai ...

My like Rau is for you.

Keep writing.

thanks praachi ji.. aapki hosla afzaayi ke liye bahut bahut shukriya
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