Manjil apni jagah...................saru...........

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मंज़िल अपनी जगह रास्ता अपनी जगह है
ज़िंदगी में सफ़र का मज़ा अपनी जगह है

मंदिर जाते हो कभी मस्जिद जाते हो
इधर उधर न  ढूँढो खुदा अपनी जगह है

कहता रहे कुछ भी ये दिल और ये दुनियाँ
लेकिन यारो मां का कहा अपनी जगह है

रूठ  के  बैठे  हैं कि मनाये  कोई  उन्हें
आता है समझ प्यार अना अपनी जगह है

कर देगा ज़मीर ही फ़ैसला इस बात का
गुनाह अपनी जगह है सज़ा अपनी जगह है

ज़रूरी नहीं कि निकले कोई मतलब बेशक़
रदीफ़ अपनी ती क़ाफ़िया अपनी जगह है

देखो कब तलक ये अंजाम तक पंहुचे'सरु'
सीधी बात नहीं सिलसिला अपनी जगह है

-सुरेश सांगवान'सरु'



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«Reply #1 on: September 17, 2015, 02:08:26 PM »
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bohat bohat umda peshkash suresh ji dherooooooooo,n daaaaaaaddddddddd

रदीफ़ अपनी ती    [jageh]    क़ाफ़िया अपनी जगह है
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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2015, 03:43:20 PM »
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ज़रूरी नहीं कि निकले कोई मतलब बेशक़
रदीफ़ अपनी ती क़ाफ़िया अपनी जगह है

देखो कब तलक ये अंजाम तक पंहुचे'सरु'
सीधी बात नहीं सिलसिला अपनी जगह है
waah waaah waaaah Saru Jee waah sabee ashiar bahutt khoob rahe, dheron daad w/ Rau.
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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2015, 07:51:08 PM »
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Bohut khib saru ji
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«Reply #5 on: September 18, 2015, 01:39:59 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 18, 2015, 08:23:45 AM »
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Dhero Mubarake...
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2015, 12:58:57 AM »
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मंज़िल अपनी जगह रास्ता अपनी जगह है
ज़िंदगी में सफ़र का मज़ा अपनी जगह है

मंदिर जाते हो कभी मस्जिद जाते हो
इधर उधर न  ढूँढो खुदा अपनी जगह है

कहता रहे कुछ भी ये दिल और ये दुनियाँ
लेकिन यारो मां का कहा अपनी जगह है

रूठ  के  बैठे  हैं कि मनाये  कोई  उन्हें
आता है समझ प्यार अना अपनी जगह है

कर देगा ज़मीर ही फ़ैसला इस बात का
गुनाह अपनी जगह है सज़ा अपनी जगह है

ज़रूरी नहीं कि निकले कोई मतलब बेशक़
रदीफ़ अपनी ती क़ाफ़िया अपनी जगह है

देखो कब तलक ये अंजाम तक पंहुचे'सरु'
सीधी बात नहीं सिलसिला अपनी जगह है

-सुरेश सांगवान'सरु'



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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2015, 07:24:23 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: September 20, 2015, 01:00:16 PM »
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thanks a lott ambalika ji
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thaaanks Mann ji.
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