Manzil Door Kharie Dakhe Rahe Hai

by FARE on November 18, 2013, 03:48:29 AM
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As Salam o Aliakum To All
aj first time ek gazel likhe hai mane maloom nhi gazel hai bhi ya nhi pr jaha galti ki hai bataye ga zaroor sab thank u .....


Kitna Dard Liye Phirte Hai
Thak Kar Fir Kharie Ho Jate Hai

Manzil Door Kharie Dakhe Rahe Hai
Chalte Chalte Pani Bhi Nahi Pee Rahe Hai

Har Jage Raet Bikhrie Huie Hai
Chaoue Dene Walla Koie Nahi Hai

Haath Bandhe Khud Ko Sambhal Rahe Hai
Fisal Kar Gande Bhi Ho Rahe Hai

Zism Ki Rooh Pighal Rahi Hai
Fir Bhi Ass Ek Dil May Pal Rahi Hai

Mosome Dhere Dhere Kharab Hota Ja Raha Hai
Tofan Ky Anne Ka Andhesha Ho Raha Hai

Khud Ko Dhap Lo Koie Chader Dy Raha Hai
Andhie Pathi Huie Or Adhie Sambhale Huie Hai

Ankhe Num Hoti Ja Rahi Hai
Faqat Ek Mahobaat Roshni Dete Ja Rahi Hai

Mere Kadam Zameen Par Chak Rahi Hai
Zameen Ki Khushbo Bhojti Ja Rahi Hai

Har Phool Diya Kante Chubo Raha Hai
Khoon Ki Pyaas Mere Mehboob Ko Tarpa Rahi Hai

Ma Bahut Pass Tere A rAHI hAI
Aj Mar Daal Ya Khud Ka Bana Dal Mahobaat Kaheti Ja Rahi Hai

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«Reply #1 on: November 18, 2013, 03:56:51 AM »
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Walaikum Assalm... Niceee oneee...
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«Reply #2 on: November 18, 2013, 04:05:10 AM »
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bhut shukriya gurriya
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: November 18, 2013, 04:19:19 AM »
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waah bahut khoob.. or aap likhte raho dhire dhire aap khud bahut hi achhi ghazal likhne lag jaogi...
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«Reply #5 on: November 18, 2013, 04:24:06 AM »
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sabhi ka bhut shukriya
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