Manzil kho gayee.............................................................Aqsh

by aqsh on January 28, 2013, 04:11:14 AM
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mkv
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«Reply #15 on: January 28, 2013, 07:04:07 AM »
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«Reply #16 on: January 28, 2013, 08:25:50 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaah bahut hi khoob Aqsh jee, bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur ek Rau bhi meri taraf se.
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«Reply #17 on: January 28, 2013, 08:26:36 AM »
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bht khoob
daad kubul karen
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«Reply #18 on: January 28, 2013, 11:08:41 AM »
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Quote from: shara63 on January 28, 2013, 06:29:30 AM
Applause bahut khoob aqsh ji, achchha kalaam hai...dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbad pesh hai !
Thank you shara jee
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«Reply #19 on: January 28, 2013, 11:09:25 AM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on January 28, 2013, 06:32:46 AM
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thanks shireen jee
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«Reply #20 on: January 28, 2013, 11:09:47 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on January 28, 2013, 07:04:07 AM
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thnx mukesh jee
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«Reply #21 on: January 28, 2013, 11:10:20 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on January 28, 2013, 08:25:50 AM
Waaaaaaaaaaaah bahut hi khoob Aqsh jee, bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur ek Rau bhi meri taraf se.
thank you so so soooooooooo much iftakhar jee
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«Reply #22 on: January 28, 2013, 11:11:08 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on January 28, 2013, 08:26:36 AM
bht khoob
daad kubul karen

thnx sarfira jee
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«Reply #23 on: January 28, 2013, 06:07:56 PM »
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«Reply #24 on: January 28, 2013, 06:15:56 PM »
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just  beautriful , aqsh . congrats .
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«Reply #25 on: January 29, 2013, 05:20:44 AM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on January 28, 2013, 06:07:56 PM
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thnx rajan kondal jee
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«Reply #26 on: January 29, 2013, 05:21:07 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 28, 2013, 06:15:56 PM
just  beautriful , aqsh . congrats .
thank you sooooooooo much hasan jee
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«Reply #27 on: January 29, 2013, 12:20:58 PM »
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Aqsh Jee Aadaab!




WaaH waaH waaH kia kahne jee behad umdaa aur khoobsurat kalaam kahi
hai kia kahne waaH... badi hi rawaaN aur umdaa gazal rahi.. Usual Smile


Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe jee kia kahne behad umdaa..
Is khoobsurat kalaam par hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Aise hi khob likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



quote author=aqsh link=topic=100896.msg1320142#msg1320142 date=1359346274]
Manzil bhi kho gayee, rasta bhi kho gaya
Jaaga magar muqaddar, phir se so gaya

Saccha tha ishq mera, jaantee huN MaiN
Naadaan tum na samjhe, dil ye ro gaya

Chahat rahee adhooree, tum naheeN mile
Kya socha aur maine, kya ye ho gaya

Ummeed ki shama, dil meN hai jal rahee
Lautega eik din, hai rooth jo gaya

Dil ‘aqsh’ ka, abhee bhee maanta nahee
Tere liye jiye , tera hi ho gaya


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«Reply #28 on: January 29, 2013, 01:48:02 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 29, 2013, 12:20:58 PM
Aqsh Jee Aadaab!




WaaH waaH waaH kia kahne jee behad umdaa aur khoobsurat kalaam kahi
hai kia kahne waaH... badi hi rawaaN aur umdaa gazal rahi.. Usual Smile


Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe jee kia kahne behad umdaa..
Is khoobsurat kalaam par hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Aise hi khob likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



quote author=aqsh link=topic=100896.msg1320142#msg1320142 date=1359346274]
Manzil bhi kho gayee, rasta bhi kho gaya
Jaaga magar muqaddar, phir se so gaya

Saccha tha ishq mera, jaantee huN MaiN
Naadaan tum na samjhe, dil ye ro gaya

Chahat rahee adhooree, tum naheeN mile
Kya socha aur maine, kya ye ho gaya

Ummeed ki shama, dil meN hai jal rahee
Lautega eik din, hai rooth jo gaya

Dil ‘aqsh’ ka, abhee bhee maanta nahee
Tere liye jiye , tera hi ho gaya



Thank you sooooooooo much parwaaz jee
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