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by adil bechain on February 18, 2011, 01:40:10 AM
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                              meri tanhaai meri mehfil sajaati hai...,
                              shaam dhale roshni kabhi aa jaati hai...,

                              tasawwar mein kitne mahal banaaye humne,
                              haqeeqat kuch aur hai hawa ye bataati hai,

                              rahi soch meri iss kashmakash mein aksar,
                              sharaab saaqi se kyon rishta nibhati hai,
          
                              hua mahboob, qaatil  etmaad-o-yaqeen ka,
                              zamaane ki nazar aaj mohabbat dikhaati hai,

                             hue  meharbaan BECHAIN usi bahaar pe.....!
                             gulistaan mein  mere jo patjhar laati hai......!

                            
                            
                              
                              

                              
                              






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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2011, 10:13:59 AM »
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wah adilji bahut umda...
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2011, 01:51:45 AM »
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BechaiN Sahaab Aadaab!

Masha Allah Janab kia kahne...
Bahut achche ashaar kahe hai...

Sabhi ashaaroN ke ahsaas o khayaal umdaa rahe aur
adaygi bhi khoob rahi..

Is khub kalaam par dil se daad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2011, 11:51:49 AM »
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                              meri tanhaai meri mehfil sajaati hai...,
                              shaam dhale roshni kabhi aa jaati hai...,

                              tasawwar mein humne kitne mahal banaaye,
                              haqeeqat kuch aur hai hawa ye bataati hai,

                              rahi soch meri iss kashmakash mein aksar,
                              sharaab saaqi se kyon rishta nibhati hai,
         
                              mahboob hua qaatil  etmaad-o-yaqeen ka,
                              zamaane ki nazar aaj mohabbat dikhaati hai,

                             hue  meharbaan phir BECHAIN usi bahaar pe.....!
                             mere gulistaan mein jo patjhar laati hai......!

Very Nice Poetry ... bechain ji !

ehsaas acche lage hume ... dil se daad !
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2011, 12:50:09 PM »
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khoob adil ji likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2011, 05:41:43 PM »
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wah adilji bahut umda...
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thank you manjum
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«Reply #6 on: February 27, 2011, 06:38:58 PM »
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BechaiN Sahaab Aadaab!

Masha Allah Janab kia kahne...
Bahut achche ashaar kahe hai...

Sabhi ashaaroN ke ahsaas o khayaal umdaa rahe aur
adaygi bhi khoob rahi..

Is khub kalaam par dil se daad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         



thanks parwaaz sahab
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«Reply #7 on: March 07, 2011, 03:41:00 PM »
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Very Nice Poetry ... bechain ji !

ehsaas acche lage hume ... dil se daad !

thank you anshu ji
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«Reply #8 on: March 09, 2011, 02:52:30 AM »
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khoob adil ji likhte rahiye~

thank you abhi
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«Reply #9 on: March 10, 2011, 12:50:29 AM »
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Very Nice Poetry ... bechain ji !

ehsaas acche lage hume ... dil se daad !

THANK YOU ANSHU JI
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