" Mere Aage "

by Roja on July 09, 2009, 03:17:01 AM
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Sarvesh Rastogi ji ka likha ek gazal "Teri Muskaan Ke Aage" pada maine. Bahut accha laga... Maine kuch aisa hi 2/3 gazal likha hai. Shayad Yo pe kahi post bi ki hu. Again I am posting here for yr valuable comment.

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दुःख-दर्द जो दीनों का है ढोता मेरे आगे
दीनों का मसीहा वोही होता मेरे आगे !

साहस से ही हेर काम हो साहस नहीं छोडो,
क्या काम हो रोने से जो रोता मेरे आगे !

तू अमरों की संतान है हैवान नहीं है,
फिर दीन बना ज़ुल्म क्यों ढोता मेरे आगे !

फल मिलता वही और न मिलता कोई,
जीवन  में जो इंसान है बोता मेरे आगे !

कभी पूरी नहीं आस हो उसकी,  "रोजा",
इनसान लगा आस जो सोता मेरे आगे
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2009, 06:14:58 AM »
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Wow Roja bahoot Bahoot Khoob Dear.. bahoot khoob Likha hai
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2009, 06:18:25 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smileybahoot khoob Roja!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2009, 08:09:03 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Roja dear   Applause Applause Applause
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aaina
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2009, 10:31:15 AM »
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nice ghazal roja keep it up
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2009, 10:38:39 AM »
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Very beatiful gazal Roja ji,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2009, 03:50:35 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 09, 2009, 06:14:58 AM
Wow Roja bahoot Bahoot Khoob Dear.. bahoot khoob Likha hai

Thanks Divya... You never forget to appreciate
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2009, 03:52:36 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 09, 2009, 06:18:25 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smileybahoot khoob Roja!!!

Thank you sweet pooja di  Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2009, 03:53:25 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 09, 2009, 08:09:03 AM
Bohot Khoob Roja dear   Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya my dear Talat...  Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2009, 03:55:03 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on July 09, 2009, 10:31:15 AM
nice ghazal roja keep it up

Thanks Aslam ji

Quote from: madhuwesh on July 09, 2009, 10:38:39 AM
Very beatiful gazal Roja ji,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank you very much dear Madhu

Quote from: @kaash on July 09, 2009, 02:02:49 PM
Applause Applause Applause

bahot achi ghazal likhi hai aapne Roja ji
hamesha ki tarah behad ache ehsaas
awesome poem

Shukriya @kaash ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2009, 04:14:40 PM »
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Insaan ko insaan hai khata mere aage
Insaan ko insaan mitata mere aage

Insaan bhale pyar nibhaye na nibhaye
Insaan magar vair nibhata mere aage

Rang saat hi girgit ko badalte dekha,
Insaan kayii rang badalta mere aage

Shaitan kiya karta kahan zulm hai utna,
Insaan kiya karta hai jitna mere aage
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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2009, 04:17:31 PM »
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Roja Ji,

Bohot khoob
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«Reply #12 on: July 10, 2009, 04:11:22 AM »
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Quote from: Shayara on July 09, 2009, 04:17:31 PM
Roja Ji,

Bohot khoob

Thanks for reading me Shayara ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: July 10, 2009, 09:55:21 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob Roja Ji bahut khoob
Bhasha aur shally per aapka zabardast control hai aur jazwaaton ka to kya kahiye.  Excelleng command over poetry.  Contragulations.

Sabse uper mera naam likh kar aapne mujhe jo izzat bakshi hai main uska shukraguzar hun.  Tah-e-dil se shukriya Roja Ji. icon_salut icon_salut
Aapki is "Mere Aage" ghazal per do sher aapke liye aapki hi tarj per --

KYA SHER KAHE AAPNE ROJA   "MERE AAGE"
KUCHH AUR BHI PUKHTA HUE EHSAAS KE DHAGE
LIKHTI RAHI ITNA HI BULANDI SE AGAR TUM
SHAYAR NA KAHEGA KOI KHUD KO TERE AAGE

All the Best

SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #14 on: July 10, 2009, 10:41:43 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Sarvesh ji,excellent. Applause Applause Applause
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