Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................Aqsh.

by aqsh on November 07, 2013, 01:58:57 PM
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«Reply #15 on: November 07, 2013, 07:38:12 PM »
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Kabhi koi khwaab toota, toh kabhi aitbaar hai toota
Teri muhabbat meiN mera dil, baar baar hai toota

Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota

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«Reply #16 on: November 07, 2013, 07:58:45 PM »
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Na jaane kyuN tere dil par kuch asar hota nahiN
Maine toh paththaroN ko bhi dekha hai pighalte hue



Kabhi koi khwaab toota, toh kabhi aitbaar hai toota
Teri muhabbat meiN mera dil, baar baar hai toota

Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota

Paaya kuch bhi nahiN, teri yaadon ke daldal ke siwa
Har ek mod par bas meri, palkhon ka qaraar hai toota

Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota

Tere fareb ne kuch, aisa haal kiya hai “Aqsh” ka
Wafa ke shajar se ab toh, ummeedeiN bahaar hai toota


Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota


khususi iss sher per ek rau qabool farmaayein aqsh ji. sara kalaam kusbsoorta hai
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: November 07, 2013, 08:39:56 PM »
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Aqsh Jee Aadaab...!

Kia kahne jee waaH bahut khoob, badi hi dilfareb aur khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne... kafi umdaa ahsaas O khayaal ko khoob lafz diye haiN aapne....

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #18 on: November 07, 2013, 08:51:12 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut hi umda.bahut daad
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«Reply #19 on: November 07, 2013, 09:12:29 PM »
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Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota

bahut badhiya
thnxxxxxx a lotttttt Mukesh ji...
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«Reply #20 on: November 07, 2013, 09:14:04 PM »
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thankyou soooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhh qalb ji....
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«Reply #21 on: November 07, 2013, 09:14:48 PM »
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waaah waaah waaah Aqsh Ji bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne...
saare ahsaar me dard ko kya khoob bayan kiya hai aaapne...

Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota..

Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota

bahut Umdaa... Applause ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
thnxxxxxxx a lotttttttt bishwajeet...
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«Reply #22 on: November 07, 2013, 09:19:35 PM »
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Wah wah bohut khub aqsh ji Applause Applause Applause Applause
thnxxxx a lotttt jeet ji..
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«Reply #23 on: November 07, 2013, 09:21:02 PM »
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waah waah aqsh jee behad umda ghazal kahi..
Har aashar me wo jaan hai ki dil ke kareebiyo.N se guzzar jaaye..
Dhero dhero daad..happy9

thank you sooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhh Ashwani...
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«Reply #24 on: November 07, 2013, 09:22:03 PM »
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वाह...वाह....अक्श जी....बहुत खूब कहा....ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद......
thnxxx a lotttttttttt amitji...
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«Reply #25 on: November 07, 2013, 09:22:37 PM »
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bas sirf waaaah hi waaaaah, bahot khooob...
Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thank you a lotttttt iqtedar ji...
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«Reply #26 on: November 07, 2013, 09:23:21 PM »
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Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :

Wah,wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Aqshji,Bahut Umdaa.Dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.

thnxxxxxxxx a lotttttttt Sudhir ji...
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«Reply #27 on: November 07, 2013, 09:23:56 PM »
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Wahh!!! wahh!! Aqsh jii bahot khoob likha hai aapne.. aati rahiye..
thnxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttt Firdaus...
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«Reply #28 on: November 07, 2013, 09:25:15 PM »
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ek rau waalee daad
thank you sooooooooo much sir aur rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut shukriya..
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«Reply #29 on: November 07, 2013, 09:28:31 PM »
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Zinda ehsaasaat aur gehre jazbaat se labrez is qalaam par dheron daad Aqsh ji aap ko ...
thnxxxxx a lotttttt zarra ji...
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