Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................Aqsh. -Panna 2:Ghazals

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«Reply #15 on: November 07, 2013, 07:38:12 PM »

Kabhi koi khwaab toota, toh kabhi aitbaar hai toota
Teri muhabbat meiN mera dil, baar baar hai toota

Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota

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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #16 on: November 07, 2013, 07:58:45 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on November 07, 2013, 01:58:57 PM

Na jaane kyuN tere dil par kuch asar hota nahiN
Maine toh paththaroN ko bhi dekha hai pighalte hue

Kabhi koi khwaab toota, toh kabhi aitbaar hai toota
Teri muhabbat meiN mera dil, baar baar hai toota

Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota

Paaya kuch bhi nahiN, teri yaadon ke daldal ke siwa
Har ek mod par bas meri, palkhon ka qaraar hai toota

Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota

Tere fareb ne kuch, aisa haal kiya hai “Aqsh” ka
Wafa ke shajar se ab toh, ummeedeiN bahaar hai toota

Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

khususi iss sher per ek rau qabool farmaayein aqsh ji. sara kalaam kusbsoorta hai Applause


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #17 on: November 07, 2013, 08:39:56 PM »

Aqsh Jee Aadaab...!

Kia kahne jee waaH bahut khoob, badi hi dilfareb aur khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne... kafi umdaa ahsaas O khayaal ko khoob lafz diye haiN aapne....

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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suman59

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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #18 on: November 07, 2013, 08:51:12 PM »

bahut hi umda.bahut daad


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aqsh

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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #19 on: November 07, 2013, 09:12:29 PM »

Quote from: mkv on November 07, 2013, 02:12:03 PM

Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota

bahut badhiya

thnxxxxxx a lotttttt Mukesh ji...


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aqsh

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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #20 on: November 07, 2013, 09:14:04 PM »

Quote from: qalb on November 07, 2013, 02:15:27 PM

thankyou soooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhh qalb ji....


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aqsh

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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #21 on: November 07, 2013, 09:14:48 PM »

Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on November 07, 2013, 02:15:49 PM

waaah waaah waaah Aqsh Ji bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne...
saare ahsaar me dard ko kya khoob bayan kiya hai aaapne...

Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota..

Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota

bahut Umdaa... Applause

thnxxxxxxx a lotttttttt bishwajeet...


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aqsh

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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #22 on: November 07, 2013, 09:19:35 PM »

Quote from: jeet jainam on November 07, 2013, 02:22:02 PM

Wah wah bohut khub aqsh ji Applause

thnxxxx a lotttt jeet ji..


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aqsh

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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #23 on: November 07, 2013, 09:21:02 PM »

Quote from: nashwani on November 07, 2013, 02:24:54 PM

waah waah aqsh jee behad umda ghazal kahi..
Har aashar me wo jaan hai ki dil ke kareebiyo.N se guzzar jaaye..
Dhero dhero daad..

thank you sooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhh Ashwani...


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aqsh

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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #24 on: November 07, 2013, 09:22:03 PM »

Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on November 07, 2013, 02:37:55 PM

वाह...वाह....अक्श जी....बहुत खूब कहा....ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद......

thnxxx a lotttttttttt amitji...


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aqsh

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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #25 on: November 07, 2013, 09:22:37 PM »

Quote from: Iqtedar on November 07, 2013, 03:28:11 PM

bas sirf waaaah hi waaaaah, bahot khooob...
Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota
Applause

thank you a lotttttt iqtedar ji...


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aqsh

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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #26 on: November 07, 2013, 09:23:21 PM »

Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on November 07, 2013, 04:39:38 PM

Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota

Applause

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Wah,wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Aqshji,Bahut Umdaa.Dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.

thnxxxxxxxx a lotttttttt Sudhir ji...


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aqsh

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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #27 on: November 07, 2013, 09:23:56 PM »

Quote from: Saman Firdaus on November 07, 2013, 05:13:26 PM

Wahh!!! wahh!! Aqsh jii bahot khoob likha hai aapne.. aati rahiye..

thnxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttt Firdaus...


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aqsh

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«Reply #28 on: November 07, 2013, 09:25:15 PM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on November 07, 2013, 05:14:24 PM

ek rau waalee daad

thank you sooooooooo much sir aur rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut shukriya..


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aqsh

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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #29 on: November 07, 2013, 09:28:31 PM »

Quote from: zarraa on November 07, 2013, 05:15:37 PM

Zinda ehsaasaat aur gehre jazbaat se labrez is qalaam par dheron daad Aqsh ji aap ko ...

thnxxxxx a lotttttt zarra ji...


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