Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................Aqsh. -Panna 3:Ghazals

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«Reply #30 on: November 07, 2013, 09:39:22 PM »

Quote from: sidra04 on November 07, 2013, 06:08:38 PM

Kabhi koi khwaab toota, toh kabhi aitbaar hai toota
Teri muhabbat meiN mera dil, baar baar hai toota

Paaya kuch bhi nahiN, teri yaadon ke daldal ke siwa
Har ek mod par bas meri, palkhon ka qaraar hai toota

Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

Waaahhhhh Aqsh.... kyaa khoobsurat kalaam kahaa hai tumne.. bahot khoob...

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likhti raho, khush raho

Sidra

thnxxx a lotttttttt sidra..


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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #31 on: November 07, 2013, 09:40:54 PM »

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on November 07, 2013, 06:21:35 PM

waah waah aqsh ji.. bahut bahut aur bahut umda peshkash... dhero daad....

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thnxx touhid ji...


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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #32 on: November 07, 2013, 09:43:05 PM »

Quote from: sahal on November 07, 2013, 06:25:47 PM

Waah waah bohut khoob aqsh ji
Lajawaab likha hai 4th ashaar khaas laga mujhe.

thnxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttt sahal...


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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #33 on: November 07, 2013, 09:46:40 PM »

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on November 07, 2013, 07:38:12 PM

Kabhi koi khwaab toota, toh kabhi aitbaar hai toota
Teri muhabbat meiN mera dil, baar baar hai toota

Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota

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thank you soooooooo much Saru ji...


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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #34 on: November 07, 2013, 09:48:59 PM »

Quote from: adil bechain on November 07, 2013, 07:58:45 PM

Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

khususi iss sher per ek rau qabool farmaayein aqsh ji. sara kalaam kusbsoorta hai Applause

Adil ji pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya aur rau ke liye bhi khaaaaaaas thnxxxxxxxxxx..


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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #35 on: November 07, 2013, 09:51:43 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 07, 2013, 08:39:56 PM

Aqsh Jee Aadaab...!

Kia kahne jee waaH bahut khoob, badi hi dilfareb aur khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne... kafi umdaa ahsaas O khayaal ko khoob lafz diye haiN aapne....

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

aapka bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji...


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«Reply #36 on: November 07, 2013, 09:54:08 PM »

Quote from: suman59 on November 07, 2013, 08:51:12 PM

bahut hi umda.bahut daad

thnxxxxx suman ji a lot..


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«Reply #37 on: November 07, 2013, 10:23:49 PM »

Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota

waah waah bahut hi khoob Aqsh jee, ye ash'aar bahut pasand aaye.


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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #38 on: November 07, 2013, 11:02:38 PM »

Aqsh ji , khubsurat ghazal padhne ko mili .bahut achhe ashaar kahe hain . tah e dil se daad aur 1 rau .


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«Reply #39 on: November 08, 2013, 03:24:25 PM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on November 07, 2013, 10:23:49 PM

Pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya Iftakhar ji....


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«Reply #40 on: November 08, 2013, 03:25:20 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 07, 2013, 11:02:38 PM

Aqsh ji , khubsurat ghazal padhne ko mili .bahut achhe ashaar kahe hain . tah e dil se daad aur 1 rau .

aapka tah e dil se shukriya hasan ji kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye aur rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut shukriya...


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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #41 on: November 11, 2013, 04:40:29 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on November 07, 2013, 01:58:57 PM

Na jaane kyuN tere dil par kuch asar hota nahiN
Maine toh paththaroN ko bhi dekha hai pighalte hue

Kabhi koi khwaab toota, toh kabhi aitbaar hai toota
Teri muhabbat meiN mera dil, baar baar hai toota

Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota

Paaya kuch bhi nahiN, teri yaadon ke daldal ke siwa
Har ek mod par bas meri, palkhon ka qaraar hai toota

Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota

Tere fareb ne kuch, aisa haal kiya hai “Aqsh” ka
Wafa ke shajar se ab toh, ummeedeiN bahaar hai toota

DheroN daad


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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #42 on: November 12, 2013, 01:00:04 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on November 07, 2013, 01:58:57 PM

Na jaane kyuN tere dil par kuch asar hota nahiN
Maine toh paththaroN ko bhi dekha hai pighalte hue

waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Aqsh ji, jaan hi le li aapke is sher ne to, sach mein bahut khoob kahaa aapne....

Kabhi koi khwaab toota, toh kabhi aitbaar hai toota
Teri muhabbat meiN mera dil, baar baar hai toota

sambhaal ke rakhnaa chaahiye ji, dil hai koi khilaunaa nahi, aap bhi naa, khud rakhte nahi sambhaalke aur ilzaam dusron par ... uuuufffff

Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota

kyaa kya tod rahe hain aap, fevicol le lijiye, kuch nahi tootegaa, aur agar toot bhi gayaa to dobaaraa jod sakte hain...

Paaya kuch bhi nahiN, teri yaadon ke daldal ke siwa
Har ek mod par bas meri, palkhon ka qaraar hai toota

ye kaisaa daldal hai, kabhi sunaa nahi humne, import karke mangwaayaa hai kyaa baahar kisi desh se? kabhi dikhaanaa zaroor humein yeh daldal

Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

aankhon pe load zyaadaa pad rahaa hogaa, zaroor aap tv zyaadaa dekhte honge, aur ilzaam humpe lagaayaa jaa rahaa hai, bahut galat baat hai....

Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota

na ji na ahumein maloom nahi thaa ki aap itni aasaani se toot jaayemge, warnaa hum aapke support k liye chaar khambe aur lagwaa dete, pehle bataanaa thaa naa jab crack padnaa shuru huwaa thaaa...

Tere fareb ne kuch, aisa haal kiya hai “Aqsh” ka
Wafa ke shajar se ab toh, ummeedeiN bahaar hai toota

ab humne kaunsa fareb kiyaa aapke saath, kuch bhi ilzaam lagaaye jaa rahe hain humpe, hum to bekasoor hain, aap jaane ki aap ke saath fareb kisne kiyaa...

sabse pehle to maafi chaahunga ki itnaa late reply kiyaa, darasal kuch kaam mein vyast ho gayaa thaa, aajkal time nahi nikaal paa rahaa Yo ke liye, aur ab aapke is rachnaa ke taarif mein to bas.... Waah waah waah waah Aqsh ji, kyaa kehne, jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne, sach, bahut bahut khoob....!!!

kuch koshish ki hai iske jawaab mein likhne ki maine, ummeed kartaa hoon aapko pasand aaye....!!!

miley hazaaron humein, ek nayaa ilzaam sahi
ghamon ke samundar mein gham kaa inaam sahi

kisine paagal kahaa, kisine kahaa deewaanaa
bewafaa jo naam diyaa, ab to yahi naam sahi

raaste ke paththar ko har kisine thukraayaa
kisise hum kyaa kahen, thokrein tamaam sahi

dard leke hi aaye the, dard leke jaanaa hai
dard har subah ab, dard bhari har shaam sahi

maikhaane ke chaukhat pe apnaa thikaanaa ho
apne kismat mein yaaron botal aur jaam sahi

apne kis kaam ke mohabbat bhare jo geet the
baazaar mein bech den kaudiyon ke daam sahi

apne alfaazon mein sur kahaan se laayen hum
ghazal nahi ban paaye ab, aur koi kaam sahi

muskaan kabhi aayi nahi sukhey in hothon par
maut gale lagaa len hum, maut hi aaraam sahi

jee to hum paaye nahi, mar mar ke jeete rahe
dard bhare is jeewan kaa dard hi anjaam sahi

*****HRIDAY*****


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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #43 on: November 14, 2013, 10:01:48 PM »

Quote from: srishti raj chintak on November 11, 2013, 04:40:29 PM

DheroN daad

thnxxxxxx a lottttt shrishtiraj ji...


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Re: Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................A

«Reply #44 on: November 14, 2013, 10:04:54 PM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on November 12, 2013, 01:00:04 AM

*****HRIDAY*****

[/quote]uffffffffffff sabse pahele so sorrrrrrry hriday ji... aaj mai ghazal section mein aayi toh aapka reply dekhi...kya zabardasttttttttt comments hai.. padhkar hans hans kar pet dard shuru ho gaya.. khaas woh fevicol waala comment aur woh chaar khambo waala comment se bahut hansi aayi.. aur aapka reply toh yakeen maano behad khoooooooob hai jaisa har baar hota hai.. aur thnxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttt for the beautiful reply hriday ji... happy3


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