Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota.............................................Aqsh.

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Na jaane kyuN tere dil par kuch asar hota nahiN
Maine toh paththaroN ko bhi dekha hai pighalte hue



Kabhi koi khwaab toota, toh kabhi aitbaar hai toota
Teri muhabbat meiN mera dil, baar baar hai toota

Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota

Paaya kuch bhi nahiN, teri yaadon ke daldal ke siwa
Har ek mod par bas meri, palkhon ka qaraar hai toota

Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota

Tere fareb ne kuch, aisa haal kiya hai “Aqsh” ka
Wafa ke shajar se ab toh, ummeedeiN bahaar hai toota
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«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2013, 07:42:03 PM »
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Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota

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«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2013, 07:45:27 PM »
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Na jaane kyuN tere dil par kuch asar hota nahiN
Maine toh paththaroN ko bhi dekha hai pighalte hue



Kabhi koi khwaab toota, toh kabhi aitbaar hai toota
Teri muhabbat meiN mera dil, baar baar hai toota

Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota

Paaya kuch bhi nahiN, teri yaadon ke daldal ke siwa
Har ek mod par bas meri, palkhon ka qaraar hai toota

Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota

Tere fareb ne kuch, aisa haal kiya hai “Aqsh” ka
Wafa ke shajar se ab toh, ummeedeiN bahaar hai toota




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«Reply #3 on: November 07, 2013, 07:45:49 PM »
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waaah waaah waaah Aqsh Ji bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne...
saare ahsaar me dard ko kya khoob bayan kiya hai aaapne...

Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota..

Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota

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«Reply #4 on: November 07, 2013, 07:52:02 PM »
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Wah wah bohut khub aqsh ji Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2013, 07:54:54 PM »
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Na jaane kyuN tere dil par kuch asar hota nahiN
Maine toh paththaroN ko bhi dekha hai pighalte hue


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Kabhi koi khwaab toota, toh kabhi aitbaar hai toota
Teri muhabbat meiN mera dil, baar baar hai toota

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Paaya kuch bhi nahiN, teri yaadon ke daldal ke siwa
Har ek mod par bas meri, palkhon ka qaraar hai toota

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Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

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Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota

 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Tere fareb ne kuch, aisa haal kiya hai “Aqsh” ka
Wafa ke shajar se ab toh, ummeedeiN bahaar hai toota

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waah waah aqsh jee behad umda ghazal kahi..
Har aashar me wo jaan hai ki dil ke kareebiyo.N se guzzar jaaye..
Dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2013, 08:07:55 PM »
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वाह...वाह....अक्श जी....बहुत खूब कहा....ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद......
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«Reply #7 on: November 07, 2013, 08:58:11 PM »
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bas sirf waaaah hi waaaaah, bahot khooob...
Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

Tu waaqif tha ki toot jaaoNgi, main teri khamoshi se
NahiN phir bhi zaalim, tere labon ka hisaar hai toota
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«Reply #8 on: November 07, 2013, 10:09:38 PM »
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Teri judaai ke in lamhoN ko, shumaar karte karte
Kabhi dekh bhi le kaise, mera sabr e intezaar hai toota

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :

Wah,wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Aqshji,Bahut Umdaa.Dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #9 on: November 07, 2013, 10:43:26 PM »
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Wahh!!! wahh!! Aqsh jii bahot khoob likha hai aapne.. aati rahiye..
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ek rau waalee daad
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«Reply #11 on: November 07, 2013, 10:45:37 PM »
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Zinda ehsaasaat aur gehre jazbaat se labrez is qalaam par dheron daad Aqsh ji aap ko ...
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«Reply #12 on: November 07, 2013, 11:38:38 PM »
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Kabhi koi khwaab toota, toh kabhi aitbaar hai toota
Teri muhabbat meiN mera dil, baar baar hai toota

Paaya kuch bhi nahiN, teri yaadon ke daldal ke siwa
Har ek mod par bas meri, palkhon ka qaraar hai toota

Roz nikal hi jaate hain, aankhoN ke zabt aansoon
Mere chashm e nam par se, mera ikhtiyaar hai toota

Waaahhhhh Aqsh.... kyaa khoobsurat kalaam kahaa hai tumne.. bahot khoob...

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likhti raho, khush raho

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«Reply #13 on: November 07, 2013, 11:51:35 PM »
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waah waah aqsh ji.. bahut bahut aur bahut umda peshkash... dhero daad.... Usual Smile

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«Reply #14 on: November 07, 2013, 11:55:47 PM »
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Waah waah bohut khoob aqsh ji
Lajawaab likha hai 4th ashaar khaas laga mujhe.
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