meri ghazal

by poonam singh on November 09, 2010, 09:26:31 PM
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jindgi ke saaj par muskurati meri ghazal,
maut ke andaaz par kuch chhatptati meri ghazal.

dusro ki khushiyo me thahake lgati hui,
apne gamm par tanhai me aansu bahati meri ghazal.

waqt ki har thhokar ko nasihat ki tarah leti hui,
jindgi ke tajurwo se alfaaj pati meri ghazal.

apni nakamiyo ke liye kismat ko kosti kabhi,
paa kabhi khushiya unpe ithlati meri ghazal.

jaanti hai faasle hai kya haqiqat khwaab me,
dekh fir bhi khwaab khud ko behlati meri ghazal.
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«Reply #1 on: November 09, 2010, 09:38:06 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Poonam Ji

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaaso se Bharpoor Hai Aapki Ghazal

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«Reply #2 on: November 09, 2010, 09:41:00 PM »
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shukriya khwaishji.
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«Reply #3 on: November 09, 2010, 09:42:55 PM »
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Bahot khoob bahot hi khoob Poonam ji, kya hi behtreen creation hai ye aapki. Parhkar achha mehsoos hua. Likhne ka andaaz qabil e tareef hai. Daad pesh karta hun.
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«Reply #4 on: November 09, 2010, 10:29:13 PM »
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acchhaa hai poonam ji.
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«Reply #5 on: November 10, 2010, 12:50:33 AM »
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waahhhhhhhhh poonam ji kya kaha hai bht hi masta likha haia aapne.....
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«Reply #6 on: November 10, 2010, 02:22:15 AM »
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jindgi ke saaj par muskurati meri ghazal,
maut ke andaaz par kuch chhatptati meri ghazal.

dusro ki khushiyo me thahake lgati hui,
apne gamm par tanhai me aansu bahati meri ghazal.

waqt ki har thhokar ko nasihat ki tarah leti hui,
jindgi ke tajurwo se alfaaj pati meri ghazal.

apni nakamiyo ke liye kismat ko kosti kabhi,
paa kabhi khushiya unpe ithlati meri ghazal.

jaanti hai faasle hai kya haqiqat khwaab me,
dekh fir bhi khwaab khud ko behlati meri ghazal.
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«Reply #7 on: November 10, 2010, 11:15:00 AM »
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jindgi ke saaj par muskurati meri ghazal,
maut ke andaaz par kuch chhatptati meri ghazal.

dusro ki khushiyo me thahake lgati hui,
apne gamm par tanhai me aansu bahati meri ghazal.

waqt ki har thhokar ko nasihat ki tarah leti hui,
jindgi ke tajurwo se alfaaj pati meri ghazal.

apni nakamiyo ke liye kismat ko kosti kabhi,
paa kabhi khushiya unpe ithlati meri ghazal.

jaanti hai faasle hai kya haqiqat khwaab me,
dekh fir bhi khwaab khud ko behlati meri ghazal.

iThlaati meri ghazal---behlaati meri ghazal...

bahut khoob...

regards
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«Reply #8 on: November 12, 2010, 08:22:10 AM »
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   Wah Janab bahut umda kalaam
   se dil khush ker diya. Dhanyawad.
    ' Dekh phir bhi khwaab
      dil ko bahlti meri gazal"
      Bahut khoob. Jara idher bhi
      nazer inayet karosa:

        "Mast aankhon ki jheelon main
        khilne lage aanson ke kanwl,
        Mil gaya raaha main ajnabi mor
        per koi jane gazel."

 
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«Reply #9 on: November 12, 2010, 11:27:50 AM »
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bahut bahutbkhoob poonam jiii~ likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #10 on: November 16, 2010, 04:10:36 PM »
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AYE SHAYERE LEKHNE WALE TERE SHYERE KO SALAM
TERE HER AIK ANDAZ GAZAL HAI.AUR MAI IS GAZAL
KA GULAM HU  Applause Applause Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: February 09, 2011, 06:29:05 PM »
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jindgi ke saaj par muskurati meri ghazal,
maut ke andaaz par kuch chhatptati meri ghazal.

dusro ki khushiyo me thahake lgati hui,
apne gamm par tanhai me aansu bahati meri ghazal.

waqt ki har thhokar ko nasihat ki tarah leti hui,
jindgi ke tajurwo se alfaaj pati meri ghazal.

apni nakamiyo ke liye kismat ko kosti kabhi,
paa kabhi khushiya unpe ithlati meri ghazal.

jaanti hai faasle hai kya haqiqat khwaab me,
dekh fir bhi khwaab khud ko behlati meri ghazal.

bahut umda poonam ji
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«Reply #12 on: February 09, 2011, 07:49:06 PM »
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bahut umdaa soch
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