MERI ULFAT KE CHIRAGHON KO JALAAYE RAKHNA ............. HASAN

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GhairoN  se  Halat - e - Mayekhana  chhupaaye  rakhna  ,
Farz   rindoN   ka   hai   Mahaul   banaaye   rakhna


Tez  toofan   hai  ,  manjdhaar  hai  , gahra   paani  ,
Apni   Naiya   ko   thhapedoN   se   bachaaye  rakhna


Hum  ne  Daulat  se  banaya  hai  jo  Chaandi  ka mahal  ,
Log   kahte  hain   ki   naam  is  ka  'Sarai'  rakhna


Laut  ke  aa'ooN  to  RaahoN  meiN  Andhera  na  mile  ,
Meri   Ulfat   ke   ChiraghoN   ko   jalaaye   rakhna
   

Tees   uthh'ti  hai  to  phir  Ashk  nikal  jaate  haiN  ,
Itna   aasaaN   nahiN   ZakhmoN  ko  chhupaaye  rakhna


DooriyaaN   Saaya-e-Dushman  se   zaroori  haiN   magar ,
Fasla    Ahl - e - karam   se   bhi   banaaye   rakhna


Hum ne  seekha  hai  Muqaddar  ke  FaqeeroN  se,  'Hasan' ,
Apne   jazbaat   ko   seene   meiN   dabaaye    rakhna
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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2013, 09:03:29 AM »
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wah wah wah wah
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2013, 09:14:30 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!



Mashaa Allaah janab kia kahne waaH jee badi hi dilshaad kalaam kahi
hai aapne... behad umdaa aur dilkash ashaaroN se khoob sajaayi hai
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Humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Aise hi umda gazaloN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye... Shaad O aabaad
rahiye... Usual Smile

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GhairoN  se  Halat - e - Mayekhana  chhupaaye  rakhna  ,
Farz   rindoN   ka   hai   Mahaul   banaaye   rakhna

Kia kahne janab is umdaa matle ke... bada hi
umdaa aur khoob khayaal bayaaN kiya hai daad daad daad...



Tez  toofan   hai  ,  manjdhaar  hai  , gahra   paani  ,
Apni   Naiya   ko   thhapedoN   se   bachaaye  rakhna

Bahut khoob janab...


Hum  ne  Daulat  se  banaya  hai  jo  Chaandi  ka mahal  ,
Log   kahte  hain   ki   naam  is  ka  'Sarai'  rakhna

Saraai ke mayne nahi pataa hai hume.. ?



Laut  ke  aa'ooN  to  RaahoN  meiN  Andhera  na  mile  ,
Meri   Ulfat   ke   ChiraghoN   ko   jalaaye   rakhna
   
Kia kahne bahut khoob daad daad daad...


Tees   uthh'ti  hai  to  phir  Ashk  nikal  jaate  haiN  ,
Itna   aasaaN   nahiN   ZakhmoN  ko  chhupaaye  rakhna

behad umdaa sher hai janab bahut khoob daad daad..


DooriyaaN   Saaya-e-Dushman  se   zaroori  haiN   magar ,
Fasla    Ahl - e - karam   se   bhi   banaaye   rakhna

Kia kahne tajurbe ki baat kahi hai janab bahut umdaa daad...


Hum ne  seekha  hai  Muqaddar  ke  FaqeeroN  se,  'Hasan' ,
Apne   jazbaat   ko   seene   meiN   dabaaye    rakhna

Behad umdaa maqta raha janab... hazaaroN daad



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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2013, 09:15:35 AM »
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bahut khoobsoorat peshkash bhaai jaan dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2013, 09:26:41 AM »
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wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah, kya baaaat hai sir abto alfaaz bhi saath nahi dete sabhi alfaz chote nazar aate hain aapke kalaaam ke aage. sabhi ashaar khoob rahe  khas taur se ye shair to kamaal hai wah  wah wah wah


DooriyaaN Saaya-e-Dushman se zaroori haiN magar ,

Fasla Ahl - e - karam se bhi banaaye rakhna,



is shair ke liye k rau qubool kareN
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2013, 09:28:57 AM »
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GhairoN  se  Halat - e - Mayekhana  chhupaaye  rakhna  ,
Farz   rindoN   ka   hai   Mahaul   banaaye   rakhna


Tez  toofan   hai  ,  manjdhaar  hai  , gahra   paani  ,
Apni   Naiya   ko   thhapedoN   se   bachaaye  rakhna


Hum  ne  Daulat  se  banaya  hai  jo  Chaandi  ka mahal  ,
Log   kahte  hain   ki   naam  is  ka  'Sarai'  rakhna


Laut  ke  aa'ooN  to  RaahoN  meiN  Andhera  na  mile  ,
Meri   Ulfat   ke   ChiraghoN   ko   jalaaye   rakhna
   

Tees   uthh'ti  hai  to  phir  Ashk  nikal  jaate  haiN  ,
Itna   aasaaN   nahiN   ZakhmoN  ko  chhupaaye  rakhna


DooriyaaN   Saaya-e-Dushman  se   zaroori  haiN   magar ,
Fasla    Ahl - e - karam   se   bhi   banaaye   rakhna


Hum ne  seekha  hai  Muqaddar  ke  FaqeeroN  se,  'Hasan' ,
Apne   jazbaat   ko   seene   meiN   dabaaye    rakhna



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Bahuttttttttttttttt Bahutttttttttttttttt Khooooooooooooob Saheb...

Har Ek Ashaar Par hazaaro Daad....Lajawaab


 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!



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Bohat Hi Khub!!! Bohat Aache!!

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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2013, 09:46:34 AM »
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lajawaab Ghazal--
iss post ke lie apne local style me daad deta hoon--!JIYO HASAN SAAB JIYO!
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lajawaab Ghazal--
iss post ke lie apne local style me daad deta hoon--!JIYO HASAN SAAB JIYO!
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lajawaab Ghazal--
iss post ke lie apne local style me daad deta hoon--!JIYO HASAN SAAB JIYO!
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«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2013, 09:58:24 AM »
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waah waah bohat khoob ghazal kahi hai aap ne ,............bohat c daad,.......
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«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2013, 10:17:45 AM »
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GhairoN  se  Halat - e - Mayekhana  chhupaaye  rakhna  ,
Farz   rindoN   ka   hai   Mahaul   banaaye   rakhna


Tez  toofan   hai  ,  manjdhaar  hai  , gahra   paani  ,
Apni   Naiya   ko   thhapedoN   se   bachaaye  rakhna


Hum  ne  Daulat  se  banaya  hai  jo  Chaandi  ka mahal  ,
Log   kahte  hain   ki   naam  is  ka  'Sarai'  rakhna


Laut  ke  aa'ooN  to  RaahoN  meiN  Andhera  na  mile  ,
Meri   Ulfat   ke   ChiraghoN   ko   jalaaye   rakhna
   

Tees   uthh'ti  hai  to  phir  Ashk  nikal  jaate  haiN  ,
Itna   aasaaN   nahiN   ZakhmoN  ko  chhupaaye  rakhna


DooriyaaN   Saaya-e-Dushman  se   zaroori  haiN   magar ,
Fasla    Ahl - e - karam   se   bhi   banaaye   rakhna


Hum ne  seekha  hai  Muqaddar  ke  FaqeeroN  se,  'Hasan' ,
Apne   jazbaat   ko   seene   meiN   dabaaye    rakhna




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aur haan,....ye ehsaas, ye jazba, aur ye tewar....abb toh main khud uski khabar le loongi jisne ghalat salat baateN bataaeen pichhli baar Giggle  
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«Reply #13 on: January 29, 2013, 10:59:52 AM »
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बहुत खूब हसन जी बहुत खूब ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद
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«Reply #14 on: January 29, 2013, 11:09:58 AM »
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GhairoN  se  Halat - e - Mayekhana  chhupaaye  rakhna  ,
Farz   rindoN   ka   hai   Mahaul   banaaye   rakhna

Tez  toofan   hai  ,  manjdhaar  hai  , gahra   paani  ,
Apni   Naiya   ko   thhapedoN   se   bachaaye  rakhna

Laut  ke  aa'ooN  to  RaahoN  meiN  Andhera  na  mile  ,
Meri   Ulfat   ke   ChiraghoN   ko   jalaaye   rakhna
  
Tees   uthh'ti  hai  to  phir  Ashk  nikal  jaate  haiN  ,
Itna   aasaaN   nahiN   ZakhmoN  ko  chhupaaye  rakhna

DooriyaaN   Saaya-e-Dushman  se   zaroori  haiN   magar ,
Fasla    Ahl - e - karam   se   bhi   banaaye   rakhna

Hum ne  seekha  hai  Muqaddar  ke  FaqeeroN  se,  'Hasan' ,
Apne   jazbaat   ko   seene   meiN   dabaaye    rakhna

Bahut khoob Sir
behad khoobsurat ghazal..
Zindgee ke tazurbe se labrej ashaar..aapka nirale andaaz ki numaaindgee karti huee, dil khush ho gaya.
Mujhko is raat ki tanhaai me ....ye geet yaad aa gaya mujhe

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