"mujhko mere khuda ye anjaam chahiye"

by aaina on September 15, 2009, 09:18:18 PM
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Dil ke waraq waraq pe tera naam chahiye
Humko mohabbat mein ye inaam chahiye

Chehra mera chipa ho tere gaisuwo.n mai aur
Sandal mai mehekti hui shaam chahiye

Karta hun kyu.n khafa tumko mai baar baar?
Diwaana hun mujko bhi koi kaam chahiye

Aeisi misaal du.n ke zamaana misaal dey
Mujko waafa mai naam badnaam chahiye

Ho.n khatm zamaane ki ye bandishe.n
Wo meri ho gayi hai, ye khbr e aam chahiye

Hai kanta uski raah mai? to phool bane aslam
Mujhko mere khuda ye anjaam chahiye
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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2009, 12:34:33 AM »
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ahaaa... Bahut bahut khoob dear Aslam ji  Applause Applause Applause
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Dil ke waraq waraq pe tera naam chahiye
Humko mohabbat mein ye inaam chahiye

Chehra mera chipa ho tere gaisuwo.n mai aur
Sandal mai mehekti hui shaam chahiye

 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2009, 11:07:48 AM »
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Bohot Khoobsurat, humesha ki tarah.....Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: September 16, 2009, 12:05:16 PM »
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aslam Sb

bahut khoob


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«Reply #4 on: September 16, 2009, 12:28:04 PM »
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Dil ke waraq waraq pe tera naam chahiye
Humko mohabbat mein ye inaam chahiye

Chehra mera chipa ho tere gaisuwo.n mai aur
Sandal mai mehekti hui shaam chahiye

Karta hun kyu.n khafa tumko mai baar baar?
Diwaana hun mujko bhi koi kaam chahiye

Aeisi misaal du.n ke zamaana misaal dey
Mujko waafa mai naam badnaam chahiye

Ho.n khatm zamaane ki ye bandishe.n
Wo meri ho gayi hai, ye khbr e aam chahiye

Hai kanta uski raah mai? to phool bane aslam
Mujhko mere khuda ye anjaam chahiye

Waah Waah Aslam ji.. Mashallah Kya khoob likha hai Jitni tareef kare uti hi kam padegi... Ak ak sher dil ko choo gaya.. Bahoot hi khubsurat aur pyaar bara likha hai... Bas yuhin likhte rahiye takhi hame bhi seekne ko mile  Usual Smile

God bless U !

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«Reply #5 on: September 16, 2009, 09:15:37 PM »
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mashallah aslam sahab ,, kya tarif karen har ashar apni zindagi ji lega ya wada hai hamara .. wah bhai wah mukammil ghazal padne ko mili .. allah apke kalamo ko miyari izzath de sahab !!

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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2009, 02:37:26 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI.......AAINA JI...

MUJHKO MOHABBAT MAIN YEH INAAM CHAHIYE,
MERE NAAM KE SAATH TERA NAAM CHAHIYE.

KARE BADNAAM ZAMAANA TOH KARNE DEY,
MUJHKO TOH MERI JAAN CHAHIYE.
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«Reply #7 on: September 18, 2009, 07:45:34 PM »
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ahaaa... Bahut bahut khoob dear Aslam ji  Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause



thnxxxxx roja dear thnxxx so much
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«Reply #8 on: September 18, 2009, 07:48:54 PM »
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aslam Sb

bahut khoob


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Bhut shukriya javed sahab is hosla afzaaaii ka,
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«Reply #9 on: September 18, 2009, 07:52:45 PM »
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mashallah aslam sahab ,, kya tarif karen har ashar apni zindagi ji lega ya wada hai hamara .. wah bhai wah mukammil ghazal padne ko mili .. allah apke kalamo ko miyari izzath de sahab !!

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Bhut shukriya qadeer sahab bhut shukriya.........................
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«Reply #10 on: September 18, 2009, 07:57:10 PM »
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Waah Waah Aslam ji.. Mashallah Kya khoob likha hai Jitni tareef kare uti hi kam padegi... Ak ak sher dil ko choo gaya.. Bahoot hi khubsurat aur pyaar bara likha hai... Bas yuhin likhte rahiye takhi hame bhi seekne ko mile  Usual Smile

God bless U !

Sophi



Thnxxxxxx so much Sophi is hosla afzaaii ka, aapne pasnd kya zahe naseeb you.n hi hosla badhaati rahiye,
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«Reply #11 on: September 18, 2009, 08:05:45 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI.......AAINA JI...

MUJHKO MOHABBAT MAIN YEH INAAM CHAHIYE,
MERE NAAM KE SAATH TERA NAAM CHAHIYE.

KARE BADNAAM ZAMAANA TOH KARNE DEY,
MUJHKO TOH MERI JAAN CHAHIYE.



Bhut shukriya Cara sahab aur mashallah se bhut acha reply kya hai aapne
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«Reply #12 on: September 18, 2009, 08:07:10 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Aslam ji,very beautiful Gazal,mindblowing creation excellent,
nice lines by Cara ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: September 18, 2009, 08:08:20 PM »
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Bohot Khoobsurat, humesha ki tarah.....Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thnxxxxxxxx alot Talat aapka saath hamesha hi rha hai youn hi saath daiti rahiye God bless u
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«Reply #14 on: September 18, 2009, 08:09:33 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Aslam ji,very beautiful Gazal,mindblowing creation excellent,
nice lines by Cara ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Thnxxxxx Madhu ji thnxxxxx for ur beautifull comments
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