"Khuda " milega to kiski duhai doge

by amarhellboy on April 09, 2009, 12:45:47 PM
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Tamam umar tum mujh ko na dikhai doge
Fir bhi mere git mai tumhi sunai doge
Barbadi ka jab tum par iljaam lagega
Us waqt jamaane ko kya safai doge
Insaan ko bharmaya "khuda" ka naam dekar
"khuda' milega to kiski duhai doge
Tum mere humdard ho magar itne bhi nhi
ki mujhe gam ki jagah khushi ki shehnai doge
Jo nadi hai humesha nadi hi rahegi
Use kaise sagar ki gehrai doge
Khud bhatke ho tum manjil ki talaas mai
Dusro ko kis tarah rehnumai doge.
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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2009, 12:53:30 PM »
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NIce One Amar Ji,.
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2009, 12:55:24 PM »
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Subhan_allah Amar kya kahu yaar Maza aa gaya. Bohat khoobsurat kalam likha hain tumne....Bohat bohat Khoob...
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«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2009, 02:44:13 PM »
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thank's azeem ji, shajid ji
sajid ji apki ek baat to maani padegi aap hi aise shaks he jo hamesha sabhi ko comments karte hai accha lagata hai or apni ye aadat barkaraar rakhiyega sukhriya dear
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2009, 03:54:11 PM »
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thank's azeem ji, shajid ji
sajid ji apki ek baat to maani padegi aap hi aise shaks he jo hamesha sabhi ko comments karte hai accha lagata hai or apni ye aadat barkaraar rakhiyega sukhriya dear

Arey janab the credit goes to you and Yoindians jo itna achcha likhte hain ke comment dena hi padhta hain, aur baat sirf achcha likhne ki nahi hain unki koshish me bohat masumiyat aur sadgi hoti hain. Aur Ghayel bas usi koshish ki izzat karta hain........main to apne aapko bhi aaj tak shayer nahi manta woh to aap dosto ne sar par chada diya hain mujhe  DOH

Bas tum yuhi likhte raho kabhi insha_allah sath likhege....
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«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2010, 09:01:02 AM »
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thank's
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